By H. L. Davis
Iโm sure as a child you heard one of the many versions of โLittle Red Riding Hoodโ that circulate the globe. While most of them do introduce three true characters in that eventโa girl cloaked in red, a nefarious wolf, and a sick grandmotherโnone of the tales youโve heard include me.
Iโm Hazel, Hazel Hood. Redโsโor should I say, Rubyโsโyounger sister. And after years of hearing what folk believe happened on that long-ago winter day, Iโve decided itโs finally time to set the record straight.
You see, growing up, no one listened to me. And thatโs not too surprising. Iโm mute. My voice has never worked, so it was easy for others to not take much notice of me.
Having a sister like Ruby didnโt help. With her flowing black locks, deep blue eyes, and flawless complexion, Ruby was always noticed. Especially by boys. Young men would come to our village from miles around just to glimpse her lovely face. But a glimpse was usually as far as things went, because while Ruby was undeniably beautiful, once you started to talk to herโฆ
Well, youโll see what I mean.
***
It was my fourteenth winter, and I stood in the snow with one mittened hand on my hip and the other gripping a basket filled with bread, cheese, wine, and cookies. My glare spoke for me. Come on, Ruby!
Ruby, of course, was carrying nothing, just standing and staring around the woods in that scarlet cloak sheโd begged to have for her birthday. I was concerned the bright garment would draw unwanted attention from hungry beasts, but Ruby wasnโt the sensible sort, and, of course, I couldnโt explain my thoughts to her.
Her eyebrows scrunched in dismay. โI thought Granny might like some flowers to brighten her day, since sheโs feeling above the weather. But I canโt see a thing.โ
I wished I could retort, Under the weather. And itโs January. But considering that Mother had needed to remind Ruby yet again yesterday that winterberries are for admiring, not eating, perhaps it was best that flowers currently occupied her thoughts. Especially as there were still plenty of other dangerous things out here that couldโ
A large, shadowy figure leapt into our path.
A wolf!
I darted to Rubyโs side, hoping he wouldnโt attack the two of us together. The wolf considered us with black, gleaming eyes. Then, startlingly, he smiled.
โAh! Two lovely young ladies out on a frigid midday walk, admiring the wonders of the wood. But whatโs thisโa basket! Do I smellโฆ cookies?โ
I reached slowly into the basket and gripped the neck of the wine bottle, in case I needed to smash it against the creatureโs skull.
Ruby whispered loudly, โShould we tell him weโre going to Grannyโs?โ
Scratch that. Maybe I should break the bottle over Rubyโs head.
โGrannyโs, eh? How delightful!โ The creature smirked. โThat wouldnโt be the little old lady who lives in the cottage just up the path, would it?โ
โYou know her!?โ
I squeezed Rubyโs arm and fiercely shook my head, but she only graced the villain with her most winning smile. โGranny is above the weather today, so weโre delivering treats to cheer her up. I was just looking for flowers to bring her as well, but no luck yet.โ
I couldnโt stop my eyeroll. The wolf noticed, and his grin widened. โWhy, I saw some violets just over that hill. Quite lovely for this time of year. You could gather thoseโas long as your companion voices no objection.โ The wolf gave me the faintest wink.
The beast!
โThank you so much, Mr. Wolf!โ Ruby crunched through the snow up the hill. I stomped along behind, casting multiple glances back to make sure the devilish creature wasnโt following us. But heโd already vanished.
***
Ten minutes later, Ruby mournfully gave up her search for flowers. โSomeone else must have picked them all!โ
I grabbed her arm and marched us straight to Grannyโs, praying the cottage was locked. We were almost at the door when I realized it was partially open. I jerked to a stop, wracking my brain for what to do. The distant sound of someone chopping at a tree was dreadfully distracting.
Rubyโs cheeks were pink from the cold, brisk walk. โReally, Hazel! Grannyโs not going anywhere.โ
I hope not.
I peered through the front window, and my eyes widened. There was that dastardly wolfโin a nightcap!โslipping on one of Grannyโs cotton nightgowns and climbing under her covers. My heart threatened to pound right out of my chest. Just then, I heard Ruby step into the cottage.
โGranny?โ she called, sweet as pie. โItโs Ruby. Weโve brought treats!โ
I gave a silent scream and looked again through the glass. Then I noticed Grannyโs small, slippered feet sticking out from under the bed. I clenched my fists. There was only one thing left to do.
***
I turned away from the gruesome sight of the dead wolf on the bed. Some might believe the strike with Grannyโs wood-chopping axe was a bit excessive, but after knocking him unconscious with the wine bottle, I couldnโt risk him waking in a vengeful rage.
Even pale from her faint and half-covered in wolf saliva, Ruby wouldnโt shut up. โOh, Hazel! Hazel! You canโt imagine what a terrifying thing it is to be eaten by a wolf!โ
I no longer had the energy to be annoyed. I gently pulled Granny out from under the bed. Thank goodness, she was still breathing. I sighed with relief and leaned my head back against the wall, waiting for her to wake.
โPoor Granny! Do you think she was eaten, too? I wonder who came and rescued us. Maybe the woodpecker we heard earlier?!โ
Woodsman, not woodpecker. And no. This time, the hero is Hazel Hood.





fun!
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I havenโt read many stories with a mute character. You did an excellent job with this retelling!
Thank you so much, Morgan! โค๏ธ
Yes, I like the way you handled this with the unique POV. I also really liked the irony and humor!
Thank you! It was fun to write.
This is such a fun story Holly!!
Thanks, Kelly! ๐
What a cute spin on one of my favorite classics!
Thank you! ๐
I love this retelling! Awesome story!
Thanks so much!!
I love the humor in this one! Good job!
Thank you, Vanessa!
Such a cute retelling!
Thank you! ๐
Cleverly done and a fun read. Red Riding Hood’s Smarter Sister. Really nice twist on the familiar legend.
Thank you so much! Iโm glad you enjoyed it.
Clever!
Thank you!
I feel Hazel’s frustration keenly. ๐
Haha, yes! I felt pretty annoyed on her behalf as I was writing.
I love the humor of this story. I laugh ever time at:
-Scratch that. Maybe I should break the bottle over Rubyโs head. –
I love seeing Hazel’s intrusive thoughts, it’s so much fun.
I love that it makes you laugh! โค๏ธ
Wow! I really love that story. Iโm very glad to now hear how it really happened. ๐ Poor Hazel!
Iโm so glad you enjoyed it! ๐