By H. L. Davis
I snap my fingers, and the broom leaps from a corner and dances about the room. It sweeps up candy wrappers and stray autumn leaves that had floated into the shop throughout the day.
And what a glorious November day it has been!
My knees creak like an old floorboard as I sit on one of the cushioned chairs behind the counter, but my heart is filled with delight. Dozens of visitors came today. So many happy, beaming faces! A welcome change from the sadness that’s shrouded our kingdom since the recent passing of young King Janson. This morning, his widow gave us news to celebrate.
Queen Elise carries the heir to the kingdom in her womb.
Misty-eyed, I bring a mug of warm cider to my lips when the bell at the front door rings.
“If that’s you, Simon Perkins, the shop is closed!” I chuckle thinking of the lad and his penchant for candy corn, like his father and grandfather before him. I open the door with a wave of my hand, but instead of the freckle-faced boy, it’s the queen.
Her skirts rustle as she steps over the threshold and lowers her velvet hood, a golden circlet glinting on her brow. She glances round at the myriad of sweets housed in glass jars along marble shelves, pausing at the lone broom tidying the floor. Her gaze then crosses the counter to me.
“Mr. Magnus. May I speak with you?”
“By all means, Your Majesty! Please, have a seat.” I gesture to the empty chair beside me. It scoots back an inch or two in encouragement.
After a moment’s hesitation, Queen Elise sits, folding her hands diplomatically and raising hazel eyes to mine.
“My late husband spoke highly of you, Mr. Magnus. Said you once served as High Magician in the palace before retiring… two hundred years ago?”
“This is true. But I soon grew bored of retirement and opened this candy shop.”
“I’ve heard rumors that you add magic to some of the sweets in your shop. Candy that can heal, for example. Or help with anxiety.”
“Indeed. One of the last times I saw young Janson, he requested butterfly taffy to calm his nerves on your wedding day.”
A spark of a smile flashes about the queen’s mouth, then vanishes. “Mr. Magnus, I believe you know I was present at the time of my husband’s accident. At the time of… his death.”
I nod, tapping my fingertips in thought. “Does Your Majesty suffer from nightmares? I have vanilla dream-drops that can help.”
“No. I mean, yes, I do have nightmares, but…” She twists her royal topaz ring to and fro. “I see the accident all the time. Over and over in my head. The horse throwing Jan. His body landing on the ground. And then…” The steadiness in her voice cracks like glass, and she blinks rapidly.
Poor child! “That is a terrible burden.”
“I must find a way to forget it. To banish that awful memory forever.” Elise straightens in her chair, hands clenched. “Which is why I need a candy that will do just that.”
An uneasy quiet fills the room, the mahogany clock raising its voice higher with each passing tick-tick-tick. My spirit grows as heavy as a boulder. “That is powerful magic you request, my queen. Very powerful.”
“I’m willing to pay. Whatever you ask. But as your queen”—her voice deepens—“I command that you at least try.”
I search her expression, wading through its flood of determination, and detect the faintest gleam of doubt.
Yes. I will present her with the choice.
I clap my hands. Elise jerks in her seat, mouth dropping open as she views the items I now hold.
“Such a candy has already been invented.” In my right hand it sits: a swirl of white and dark chocolate tucked inside a shimmering paper wrapper. “But as always, those who purchase magical sweets must first read and sign a contract.” The creamy page in my left hand flies onto the queen’s lap.
She picks up the paper, scanning the small script. Her lips part, brows raised. “Why, it says this bittersweet candy will erase all my memories of Jan! As though I’d never known him!”
“I’m afraid that’s the only way. To lose the bad memories, the good must go with them. They are so intertwined, no earthly power can separate the two.”
Her eyes dart between the bittersweet and the contract shaking in her hands. “I can’t possibly give up all my memories of Jan. But…” She swallows hard. “How can I serve the people well with this dark cloud looming over me? How can I be a good mother to my child?” Tears flow drop by drop down her pale cheeks, marking the paper with her sorrow.
My own voice quavers as I lean forward and speak. “My dear, hear an old man. I know this shadow feels too great to bear. In my centuries of life, I’ve seen my share of them. But shadows, however large, only exist because they are surrounded by light.”
Queen Elise stares at me for many hushed seconds. Then with small, strong fingers, she rips the contract in two. The pieces drift to the floor. As the shop’s windowpanes rattle in the fall wind, she pulls her cloak more tightly about her shoulders.
“Thank you, Mr. Magnus. I hope your broom won’t mind a little extra sweeping. I’ll take some vanilla dream-drops, if you please. And a piece or two of butterfly taffy.”





What a beautiful story! And perfectly titled, too 🥹
Thank you so much!
What a great story! It’s so well written and titled!!
Thank you, friend.
What a well-written story with the theme of *light* and *dark* woven throughout. I always enjoy your short stories. This may be my new favorite.
That means a lot to me. Thank you! ❤️
This is a beautiful piece! I loved the thread of light and dark woven through it!
Thanks for your kind words!
She made the right choice. Those forgetting chocolates are stuffed full of processed sugars, dyes, and empty calories.
Don’t forget: Magical candy, no bad ingredients. 😉
I’m reading the ingredient list off the forgetting chocolates box right now…
Sugar is the number one ingredient so that’s bad enough, but there’s also partially hydrogenated vegetable oil, butylated hydroxyanisole, eye of newt, toe of frog,
wool of bat, tongue of dog…. These can’t be healthy!
😂
Well written. A touching story that goes to your heart. I felt this story deeply. I love it.
Thank you. ❤️
Oh I love this so much. The magic, the fall vibes, the sadness mixed with love. So good!
I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
I loved this, Holly. Such a poignant message wrapped in a playful setting.
Thanks so much, Emily! Happy you were able to give it a read.
What a delightful story! I love the autumn vibes, the little surprises scattered throughout as the story unfurls, and the gentle reminders of truth (i.e. “shadows only exist because they are surrounded by light”).
Thank you, Emma! For taking the time to read my story and share your thoughts with me. Means so much!
bitter/sweet indeed…
Thanks for reading. 🙂
Wow! I love this story so much! Beautiful!
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Oh Holly, this is among your best! And that says a lot because I love all of yours. Thank you so much for this today!
🥹 Thank *you*!!
Great story! A “sweet” reminder of how important it is to hold on to the wonderful memories of those we love🩷🩷
I’m so happy you got to read it! 🩷
A wonderful message!
Thank you, Morgan!
Delightful and thoughtful.
Thanks so much!
The red pill or the blue pill? I prefer your choice of candy instead. 😁
Lovely story!
Thank you!!
Beautiful story, Holly, and a great reminder of what’s important ❤️
Thanks, Cassie. 😊
Holly. ❤️❤️
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A beautiful story. And so true—how light and dark, despair and hope, are so entwined. Thank you for sharing!
Thanks so much for reading, Tracy! 😊
Love this one, Holly!
Thank you! 💕
Such a beautiful story! Love always contains sweetness and bitterness, doesn’t it? I think she made the right decision, although I’m curious how she would explain being pregnant if she couldn’t remember being married.
Thanks for reading, Arlan! Yes, life and love have their share of both, don’t they? And precisely. Her forgetting just couldn’t have possibly worked well. As much as some memories can hurt, the past affects who we are in the here and now.
Yes!!
This was an excellent story. 💞
Thank you so much. 💕