By Tracey Dyck
The door of Sebastian’s Magickry opened with a tinkle of the bell, precisely fifteen minutes after closing time.
âCan’t you read the sign?â I asked without glancing up from the beans I was sorting on the back counter. âWe’re closed.â
A floorboard creaked. Something shifted in the atmosphere, like the faintest current of electricity firing between dust motes. âEven for a paying customer?â
I turned around. A man stood in the half-open doorway, a trench coat and fedora obscuring his features in sepia shadow. I smirked at his getup. âIt’s quarter after six, Indy. On a Monday. Come back tomorrow.â
âSee, TamiâŚâ he began.
How did he know my name?
âI don’t think you quite understand.â He took three easy strides toward me, past a purple tapestry and a grandfather clock. âThere won’t be a tomorrow if you insist on kicking me out.â
A laugh bubbled out before I could stop it. Did this guy just step out of an action flick? The costume and cheesy lines came off as ridiculous in the shop’s cozy confines. âIf that’s a threat, Uncle Seb is going to be back from town any minute. He’ll kick you out himself.â
The stranger took another step, passing the Excalibur replica on the wall and the display of fake dragon scales below it. Funny how summer tourists couldn’t recognize a highly polished river rock when they saw it. People saw what they were looking forâthat was what Uncle Seb counted on. Most of our customers smiled indulgently at our collection of âmagical’ objects. An enthusiastic few were convinced we sold long-dormant talismans of real power.
The man came to a stop in a beam of sunlight struggling through the dust-smeared windowpane, and the glow peeled a mask of shadow off his face, revealing white skin pulled tightly over his skull and teeth visible through paper-thin lips.
I clutched the countertop to keep from staggering. Okay. Not Indy. âWhat are you?â
He smiled. âI’m what you killed.â
âGreat.â My hand drifted toward the cell phone in my back pocket as my voice shook. âExcept, I’ve never killed anyone. I couldn’t even squash the spider I found spinning a web in the witches’ broom display.â Slowly, I palmed the phone, keeping it out of sight below the counter.
âNot just you, Tami,â he said. His own hand slipped under his coatâgoing for a gun? âYou and this whole cursed world.â
My thumb poised to make an emergency call.
âAh, ah, ah.â He whipped out not the expected pistol, but a twigâa slender branch the length of a ruler, crooked and knobby at one end. A wand?
Again, I didn’t know whether to give in to the terror knocking my knees together or release a laugh.
âYou’re not calling anyone for help.â He flicked the wand. A bolt of light sizzled from its end, lanced through the counter, and struck my phone. It flared hot in my hand before turning stone cold.
I jammed the power button. The screen remained black. âI had sixty percent battery life ten minutes ago! What did you do?â
âYou’re a slave,â he sneered. âThings like thatââhe pointed at my dead phone as if it were a giant slugââare giving off a toxic frequency. Your gadgetry killed magic in this world. I’m here to restore what once was, to repay you for your crimes.â
It would be nice if our Excalibur replica was actually sharpened. That is, if bringing a sword to a gunfight with the Grim Reaper dressed as Indiana Jones would actually save my skin. I scanned the shop for another weapon, discounting the beans scattered across my counter, the golden eggs and magic mirrors and genie lamps on the shelves, the pied piper’s magic pipe, advertised at twenty percent off when purchased with a book of spells. The trident leaning in the near corner. The trident.
I lunged for it. The edge of the countertop jabbed into my hip as I threw myself past it. Before my fingers could wrap around the trident’s rusted staff, another burst of light hurtled from the stranger’s wand. But rather than strike me, it crashed into the trident. I hit the floor on my hands and knees.
The trident quivered in place. A metallic ring shivered in the air, taking far too long to die away. It rang and rang and rang until my ears throbbed.
I covered them. âMake it stop!â
But he just smiled through translucent lips as the noise grew louder. The trident rattled and spun on its end like a whirling top. I scooted backward. Rust peeled off the weapon to reveal gleaming blue metal underneath. It took on a light of its own, revolving, pulsing like a planet out of orbit.
âI said make it stop!â
âThis is the reawakening, Tami!â he shouted over the din. âIt’s what your dear uncle never wanted to happen, and it’s what I am hell-bent on bringing to pass.â
The trident’s light grew so bright, I could barely look at it. Beneath the whine, a rattling and clinking surged. The purple tapestry tore itself from the wall and zoomed across the room, airborne. The grandfather clock boomed midnight. Excalibur beamed like a miniature sun, adding to the trident’s glare. Golden eggs cracked. Smoke puffed from the spouts of genie lamps. Somewhere, a mirror shattered. All over Sebastian’s Magickry, baubles and trinkets whistled and shook and flew.
All the blood drained from my face, and a scream lodged in my chest.
There was a horrific crack.
The beansâgone. In their places, a small forest of thick green stalks split the counter into pieces as roots plunged downward and trunks shot to the ceiling. Wood groaned.
My heart hammered. âMakeâitâstop!â
âMy dear Tami, that’s what you are for.â Heedless of the erupting chaos, he strolled toward the door, then glanced back at me with a grin and tipped his fedora. âAren’t you the magic killer?â






Oh, wow! Never would have thought there’d be a watcher over magic ;D Freaky ;D Great story, Tracey!
Keturah @ keturahskorner.blogspot.com
He might not be the only one. ;) Thanks so much, Keturah!
That was awesome, Tracey. I loved how everything slowly came back to life and what we thought was fake wasn’t. I wanted more.
Thanks so much, Rae! That was probably my favorite part to write.
That is awesome! I can’t wait to read the whole book!
Thanks, Jolene! This is all there is, actually, but I might turn it into a full book one day! :)
Beautiful prose and imagery!!! Loved it!
Thank you, Kaitlyn! Thatâs really sweet. ^-^
More, please.
Glad you enjoyed it! Admittedly, this story is now a pesky plot bunny begging for a novel.
There is so much STYLE in this piece of flash fiction. I love Tracey’s tone so much!
Youâre going to make me blush. Thank you!
AAAHH that was so intense, quirky, and . . . well . . . magical! And now I want to know more. O_O I loved it! And the writing is . . . whew! This was so gooood. <3
Haha, youâre the best, Deb! So very glad you enjoyed it.
The shop erupting in chaos took my breath away! That’s some serious havoc-wreaking. ;) Epic story, Tracey!!
Yay, mission accomplished! Thanks for reading, Lila!
This is wonderful, Tracey! I feel a novel coming on… :)
So do I… ;)
This was so epic, Tracey! You did seriously great with it, I love that you managed to put so many elements of surprise in so short a piece. Awesome job!
Thanks for the encouragement, Savannah! That word limit is tough (but so rewarding) to beat.
Wow, I love this! Makes me wonder what the heck Tami did to kill magic. xD And I can just picture this whole scene in a movie.
Thatâs a high complimentâthank you! I always hope the visuals and mood come across well. :)
Amazing story, Tracey đđ I hope someday you write a novel in this world â¨
Thanks for reading, Loie! Iâd love to do that one day. đ
Awww wow so cool! Love that Tracey – feels like somehow it could just keep on going and going :DD
Haha, it felt that way writing it! So glad you enjoyed. đ
OH MY GOODNESS, TRACEY. How do you write so well?! I ADORE your worldbuilding, and just… I could FEEL the story and the characters and the emotions and bASICALLY YOU’RE A WRITING GENIUS AND I LOVE YOUR STORIES SO INSANELY MUCH <333
Oh my goodness, Liv, youâre so kind! Thank you! đ Iâm glad it was immersive.
So, I need more of this like, yesterday. 0_0
Great job, Tracey! Loved the concept, the intrigue, the detail. Sooo good. I’ll be waiting for the full-blown novel. ;)
Haha, thank you! Full-blown novel coming upâjust as soon as I finish my current work in progress, of course. đ
Wow! When can I read the rest of this story? You got my attention.
Thanks so much, Dad! đ This is all there is… for now.
That was brilliant. And what an engaging way to mash up the theme and genre! Like others have said, the moment where things started animating was awesome, and Iâd be very interested to see what happens next.
Wow, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. And truth be told, Iâd be interested to see what happens next tooâbecause I have very little idea!
AAHHH!!!!! This was so fun! Creepy and fantastical and epic moments of humor scattered throughout that balanced the creepiness perfectly! I loved this and I need an entire novel about these characters, like… yesterday, please!
Oh goodness, thank you, Jenelle! So glad you enjoyed it! :)
Ahhh, Tracey! This story gives me the chills. I love it. I wanna know more. The characters were amazingly developed. And the writing style flows so beautifully. Seriously this is the best thing Iâve read in ages! :0
If I could I would give this the best review possible, because it deserves that and more. <3
Yay! Awww, thatâs so encouraging, Chloe. Youâre the best! <3
I love it!
Thank you!
So good Tracey- wow! I was ready to keep reading! Proud of you and so excited for youđâ¤
Thanks so much! â¤ď¸
This is so good! Great story, Tracey!! :D
Thanks for reading, Gray! đ
Tracey, way to go! I just loved reading this!! You have such a way with words! You make them come alive! God has good, good plans for you and your writing, my precious daughter!
Thank you for the encouragement, Mom! đ
Packed a punch in a short piece! Love the blend of quirkiness, wit, magic and thrill.
Thank you, Dana! Happy you enjoyed this little piece.
Can I beta-read the novel that this needs to be ASAP?
Haha! Wish I could say yes! Maybe when it gets written one day. ;)
Love the characters and the way the magic seems to blossom slowly. Very cool.
Thank you very much! The magic was one of my favorite parts to write.
This maintains a wonderful balance between scene setting and action. You also packed a genuine sense of threat into your antagonist.
Wow, thank you, Laura! That’s great to hear. Sorry I missed your comment.
Love this! The concept for the magic coming back to life is super cool, and I’d love to hear what happens.
Thanks so much, Julia! I’m glad you enjoyed! Confession… I wound up writing a novel-sized expansion of this story for NaNo last year, but it’s one of the messiest first drafts EVER. :P
THIS
IS
AWESOME!!!
THANKS SO MUCH!!!
The reason I am commenting so long after this was posted is because I am reading the free New Years deal.
This is probably my favorite Havok story so far! I love how the “magic hoaxes” turned out to be real! This should be turned into a full legnth-novel!
Great job!
Thank you, Joseph! So glad you enjoyed this story. I did actually attempt to write a novel based on this for NaNoWriMo a couple years ago. That draft is waiting patiently for a rewrite, haha.
P.S. I approve of your “Eye of the Oracle” profile pic!
What an awesome concept!! And I loved all of the details when the magic came back. Great job, Tracey!!