By Rose Q. Addams
The confectionerโs window is a mouthwatering sight.
A miniature garden complete with caramel truffle walls, a spun-sugar pagoda, marzipan birds, a rock-candy fountain, and a couple carved from chocolate that kiss one another within the shade of a sprawling bon-bon tree. The whole scene is shaded by an awning to keep the sweets from melting in this afternoon sunshine.
A dirty boy of perhaps twelve stands within the shade, hands pressed against the glass, staring intently. Most people pass by without a glance, and thatโs the way it should be. When theyโre moved to help, itโs my time to get involved.
Of course, that happens rarely here in the bakerโs district. Most are too busy to notice. Those who can afford to are often too snobbish to help, but I still canโt take the chance. He always was a charmer.
โWhoa.โ A cab slows to let a fruit vendor pass, blocking my view of the boy for a moment. The horse looks me in the eye and snorts, shying away. When the driver urges it along once more, a woman lingers in the shade, conversing with my target.
Blast.
I pull down my cap, turn up my collar, and step from my alleyway hiding spot.
One of those wretched horseless carriages screeches by, missing me by inches. I bolt across the street, every nerve on edge. If he noticedโฆ but he seems to be in the midst of his act, shuffling one foot along the ground as he stares down, lips moving in a murmur.
Reaching the sidewalk, I lower my head and bustle by, just another laborer. As I pass the woman, I snatch the reticule under her arm and put on a burst of speed.
โThief!โ she shrieks. I dart around the people who scurry outside to see whatโs going on. Sheโs surrounded now, and heโll slip away. He always does when a crowd forms.
I continue my mad dash as a few passersby give chase, but I outrun them easily, dropping her bag about halfway down the block. Then, I dart into the safety of another alley and slow down, skirting the man slouched against the bricks as I return to my post.
He resumes waiting, forgotten. Iโve won this one, and he knows it. But thereโs always another round. Heโs always hungry. This must stop.
Two hours pass. The sun sinks beyond the horizon. Itโs touch-and-go nowโtimeโs running short. I press my head to the side of the building and try to take in the putrid stench of the alley, instead of scents that twist my gut with hungerโand the ones that bring back memories.
Fresh bread. Sugary sweetness. The acrid tang of coffee. An abundance of spices and seasonings. Above it all is the smell of people, animals, and smoke. London is still beautiful, despite the hunger that claws at your insides and the darkness that dances in every fleeting shadow.
Whatโs important is that I donโt let it win. I donโt let it take and make me something Iโm not. And heโs forgotten.
Now, the people are fewer and farther between. They hasten along in little spurts and rivulets, as though the arteries of the city clot for a second, then run free again. As the last of the sunset fades, a lamplighter comes through spreading a warm glow that tips the streets in gold. I step a little closer to the light, drawing a deep breath of relief as he leaves. The street is silent. Itโs just me, the boy, and the deepening shadows.
โYou should leave,โ he says quietly, words carrying clearly across the cobblestones.
โNot until you do,โ I reply.
โThis is my territory,โ he says, voice dipping into a guttural snarl.
โYou know very well that I donโt want your prey. Or any prey at all,โ I reply. โI wonโt stand by and let you do this.โ
โStill holding the grudge?โ
โItโs not about a grudge, Philip.โ
โDonโt call me that!โ He whirls on me, teeth bared. His elongated canines glisten. His eyes are no longer the gentle hazel I once knewโthey havenโt been for decades. Theyโre an eerie, empty black. A match to my own.
โYou know very well that Philip, the whelp, died long ago. And I rose in his place, stronger than he ever was.โ
โStronger? All you do is serve your stomach. You drink the lifeblood of others and leave them dead, if theyโre lucky.โ
โPfft. Dunce. I shared immortality with you, and youโre complaining about it.โ
โIf your idea of immortality is unending temptation and agony…โ
โOnly for you. Youโre foolish enough to deny what you are.โ
โI wonโt consume others to tide me over until the next hunger pang strikes!โ I bash the lamppost, and wince as the iron dents under my blow.
โYouโre getting stronger,โ he murmurs, lifting a brow. โAbstinence, hmm?โ His smirk taunts me.
I grit my teeth. โIโd lose control if I didnโt find something to eat. Iโve tried to take you before. Clare Market. Old blood works well enough.โ
He guffaws. โYouโre taking castoffs and drainings from the butcheries?โ
โIโm not a murderer, like you!โ
โMurder is killing another of your kind. Weโre vampires, not men. Thereโs nothing to keep me from taking my fillโฆ except maybe you.โ His eyes narrow, and he shifts his weight as I stride toward him.
A shadowy figure emerges from the alleyway beside him, and his head snaps toward it.
No!
I rush him, and we collapse into the gutter. My hands close around his throat as he thrashes beneath me, and the figure draws closer.
โMove, Ben,โ the figure says, raising the stake we prepared. โYou heard him. He has no regrets.โ
The monster who was once Philip goes still beneath me. โNot a murderer, eh?โ he hisses.
โIโm sorry,โ I whisper. โI tried to help.โ
โLeave off with the pity,โ he growls. โYouโll join me soon enough.โ
The stake falls.





Delicious descriptions at the start. Great twist.
Thank you!! For the images at the beginning, I got inspiration from one of my favorite shows… The Great British Baking Show. ๐
Well, you were making me hungry, until the twist! Very well done!
Thanks very much! ๐
Ooooh fascinating! And poor Ben… he really did try. I’m curious about that unnamed figure though, and what his partnership with Ben might entail. Great story!
Thank you for reading! And I may have to explore more in this world… though not for the time being. I scared myself a little bit writing this. No more writing stories for my spooky-story-fan sister!๐
Woww. That was well-written, extremely unexpected, and creepy. Overall, very well done. *applauds*
Thank you, friend!! โค๏ธ
Great vampire story! I love your descriptions! Very crisp and poetic.
Thanks much! I worked quite hard to set a mood with precise words… I’d guess I succeeded!
This is a very cool twist on the usual vampire story. I love the idea of two vampires having known each other for centuries. I also really like the setting, especially the time period you chose. Great story!
Thank you!!
(I love tinkering in Victorian England, though I don’t do if often. If I had a time machine, it would be in my top 3 destinations!)
Great opening setting. Maybe put another story in the candy shop?
Thank you very much for reading– and yes, I think I might!
Though I’d definitely have to do a bit more research in Victorian sweets. ๐
Chilling twist!
Thank you! I really like twist endings in other people’s work and am pretty happy when I can make decent ones of my own.