By Hannah Carter
Rumors said she went mad for beauty.
And while Briar’s search had begun with a desperate desire to keep the fairy-given beauty… it had evolved into so much more.
She hadn’t gone mad for beauty.
She’d transcended it.
A red horizon lit the battlefield and illuminated the corpses of those who had tried to prevent her enlightenment. Only broken backs and ripped-out throats served as rewards for their vain efforts.
The jagged ends of shattered weapons pierced the sky, and Briar inhaled the aroma of blood—of death. A scent sweeter than the summer breeze. She cackled as she paced around the last remaining survivors of this battle for beauty—the three fairies who had raised her.
“You were such a sweet, innocent child,” Ophelia blubbered. The youngest of Briar’s fairy godmothers, she’d always been the most soft-hearted of the three. “What happened?”
Briar ran a hand over her pale, flawless cheek. “I grew up. That’s all. And you three abandoned me when you let me grow up.”
“We didn’t abandon you.” Cornelia, the eldest, shoved her sisters away from Briar in a protective gesture. “Even we cannot stop time. We gave you gifts—”
“You gave me beauty,” Briar snarled. She hissed at them, her teeth bared in a threat. They could easily join the bodies that surrounded them. “But even fairy-blessed beauty is fleeting. And for a woman, beauty is only beneficial in her youth.”
“Haven’t you ever heard of aging gracefully?” Amelia, the middle fairy, muttered. “Besides, you’re only twenty-seven.”
“An old spinster, a princess past her prime years of marriage eligibility,” Briar sneered. The words, whispered three years ago by one of her father’s boorish advisors, still stung.
After she’d overheard them, Briar had run into her bedroom and stared at the mirror, dissecting every angle of her face, every aspect, for a flaw. She couldn’t find a single imperfection—she was fairy-blessed, after all.
But fairy-blessed beauty was no match for mortality.
She remembered the fear she experienced every birthday, as the calendar reminded her that she inched ever toward her coffin. And her beloved “aunties” had refused to stop it, refused to give her one final gift.
“I only asked for immorality,” Briar whispered. She bent next to a corpse and trailed her finger through the blood on his neck. It stuck to her fingers, and she sniffed it. “Was that too much for you fairies? Can you only give worthless christening gifts and paltry curses?”
“No one is meant to live forever. Not even fairies.” Cornelia’s gray hair fluttered in the wind.
Briar chuckled. “That’s what you told me. But you left something out, didn’t you?” She flashed her newfound fangs and licked the crimson liquid off her hands. “Vampires can.”
“We didn’t think you’d be depraved enough to turn to black magic,” Amelia snapped. “But now I wish we’d given you a beautiful heart instead of a face. Your pride has turned you ugly from the inside out.”
Briar snarled and lunged at the fairies.
She leapt on Amelia first. Briar’s sharp claws dug like thorns into the fairy’s neck. Briar fantasized about snapping it, just like she had with hundreds of her father’s soldiers before the fairies had arrived. She’d drain Amelia of any blood left in her body. How beautiful would Briar be if she drank fairy blood?
Might as well try it.
A blast of Ophelia’s magic caught Briar midair, throwing her off Amelia.
Ophelia sobbed. “Can’t you see reason? We don’t want to hurt you, dear.”
Briar growled as she crouched in a puddle of blood next to a corpse. A man whose face was forever frozen in horror, her wondrous visage the last thing he saw. “Don’t flatter yourself. You can’t hurt me, aunties.” Briar charged at them on all fours and dove for Cornelia in front.
The fairy grabbed Briar’s neck and surged into the air. Briar snapped and kicked. Her fingernails tore at Cornelia’s arms. Blood trickled from the scratches and stirred a primal bloodlust inside Briar. She hissed and stuck her tongue out to catch even one globule of that precious liquid as she and Cornelia soared into the clouds.
“I’m sorry, love,” Cornelia whispered—and released her grip.
Briar plummeted like a bat without wings.
The wind buffeted her face and stole her breath. She slammed into the earth with an awful thud. Ophelia wailed, but her cries stopped as Briar shoved herself upright.
Broken bones mended themselves. She cracked her neck back into place and stood. “I told you. You can’t kill me. I am everything I have ever wanted to be. Beautiful. Young. Immortal. Indestructible.”
Amelia raised her palm. Green magic buzzed around her fingers. “Inhuman.”
A bolt of lightning struck Briar’s chest. She flipped backward and rolled to a stop beside a soldier. She had assumed him to be dead like the rest, but, this close to him, she could hear the faint heartbeats in his chest that still pumped blood through his body.
She grinned and dove for her next meal.
The tiny morsel rejuvenated what energy she’d lost in the skirmish. Once again she faced the three fairies, who stood in a triangle formation with their arms extended.
Blue, red, and green magic intertwined and raced toward Briar. She dodged it and surged at them with vampiric speed.
Cornelia’s eyes locked with Briar’s. “You are not as powerful as you believe you are, Briar.”
She’d pay for that insult.
Briar opened her mouth and dove for her auntie’s neck—only to find a spindle lodged in her own chest. Cornelia used the tiny weapon to shove the princess away, and Briar hit the ground.
“You can’t kill me.” Briar yanked the spindle out.
“No,” Cornelia said. “But we can curse you.”
Briar’s world spun, and she tottered.
Amelia waved. “Pride comes before the fall, love.”
Briar tumbled to her side, caught in the stranglehold of cursed sleep.





averous and greed are blinding! sleep well briar…
She’ll sleep, but you never know for how long…. 😜 Thank you so much for reading! 😊
Wow! What a great twist on this tale! Loved it. Well done 👍🏼
Thank you so much!! I really enjoyed writing this. 😊🩸
Thank you so much for this dark, exciting story! I was definitely gripped in the thrill of the battle the whole time, wanting to read more to find out what happens. I love the twist at the end that brings it back to the original story and the vivid descriptions of the battle. I also really appreciate being in the POV of the villain. So interesting, as everyone thinks they are in the right.
Awwww, thank YOU for reading!! 😊🩸 I had so much fun weaving bits of the original story into Vein Beauty and changing it, too! And writing Briar—she’s a fun villain to write! 😊🩸
Now, see, I hear of Snow White being a vampire… but Sleeping Beauty is a whole other tale. Very well-told!!
Right?! It’d be a lot of fun to make a collection of vampire retellings of all the classic fairy tales! 👀🩸
Horrific but beautiful at the same time. Well done!
Thank you so much!! I love writing and reading horrifically beautiful stuff! Maybe that’s why Stranger Things is one of my favorite shows. 😂🩸
Love that show! It definitely has a horrifically beautiful vibe!
Whoa!! That was the most intense retelling of Sleeping Beauty I’ve ever read. Amazing job!
Awww, thanks so much, Cass!! I had so much fun writing it. I really tried to lean into the darkness on this one! 😊🩸
Oh my goodness. I’m going to have nightmares now, Hannah! I loved the twist on this fairy tale!! Well done 😁
Haha– thank you so much, Em!! And sorry about the nightmares… I hope you can still get all the “beauty sleep” you desire tonight! 😂🩸
I see what you did there… XD
Now I want to read a vampire Sleeping Beauty story!
You may just get your wish! I’ve got a couple of ideas now for Briar… 👀🩸
Heartbreaking and intense wrapped all into one. I don’t know if I want to say poor fairies or poor Briar or both!
I absolutely loved this story, Hannah! So well written!!!