By Andrea Renae
āA bowl of stew canāt save the world, sis.ā
Miriel Takkenridge slammed a pot on the stove. āHow about you leave the world saving to me, Todd?ā Frowning, she diced two onions before her eyes had a chance to water. āUnless youāve been crowned Chosen One in this universe?ā Her chopping stilled as she threw her redheaded, middle-aged brother a look.
Todd inspected his grease-stained hands, and Miriel regretted the jab. Heād never gotten over being left behind.
Miriel began searing the mountain of cubed bison. The aroma filled the cottage, and ribbons of drool pooled beneath the jowls of a giant, sweater-clad dog as he watched from his oversized pillow. Miriel tossed him a chunk of potato. āNow, now, Matteo. You gotta wait, same as everybody else.ā
She turned back to Todd, waving a parsnip. āI donāt care what you think of my stew. Go sniff out the souls who could use a hot meal. Thereās usually a few down by the river.ā When he started to protest, she smiled sadly. āHunger doesnāt take a holiday.ā
Sighing, her brother stood and walked toward the door, stopping by the salivating Saint Bernard.
āYou know, Miri, youāre not the Chosen One in this world, either,ā he said softly, āand the one you saved is long gone.ā He gave Matteo a half-hearted scratch. āYouāre allowed to enjoy the life youāve earned, make up for time lost.ā As if wary of the squall heād agitated, Todd escaped out the door.
Swallowing her irritation, Miriel scraped the vegetables into the pot, then slumped into a chair and buried her fingers in her storm-cloud hair.
Three decades back in her hometown hadnāt been enough to readjust to life, nor had the time made folk any more comfortable with herāaside from her once-older-now-younger brother. The fact that sheād disappeared for five years when she was seventeen and returned as a thirty-seven-year-old made them distrustful, despite the good sheād done. Since Miriel wasnāt one to feel sorry for herself, she poured her energy into righting the wrongs within reach.
But would it ever be enough?
She squeezed her eyes shut. āMatteo, who am I if Iām not savinā the world?ā
The dog gave a rumbling woof that filled all the empty spaces in Mirielās tight chest.
āWell. That sets me straight.ā She laughed, slapping her knees as she stood. āOne pot of world-saving stew, cominā right up.ā
***
Two hours later, the food was cooling, but Todd had not returned. Miriel peered into the fading light, hands on her hips.
āYou think somethingās wrong?ā
Matteo whined and licked her elbow.
That was all the affirmation Miriel needed. She blitzed around, turning off the stove and shoving bandages, tinctures, and bottled water into a patched satchel. At the threshold of the cottage, her eyes clapped on the front closet. Inhaling sharply, she selected a deep green jacket and slipped it on. The dragonskin leather still fit her like a glove. Heart thudding, she pulled out a dagger, eyeing it wistfully.
āWish moreān one had made it back with me, but youāll have to do.ā
She took off, Matteo struggling to keep up.
Night was fast approaching by the time she made it to the river, where a large encampment of homeless souls had sprung up. With the war to the eastāone in which she was ātoo old to enlistāārefugees were common enough that folks had gotten good at turning a blind eye.
Miriel peered at the ramshackle shelters, gasping when she registered several prone bodies. āTodd?ā she called. There was no response.
Before despair could cripple Miriel, Matteo bounded ahead with all the subtlety of a drunken dragon. She crept forward, gripping her blade, until voices came within earshot. Whining anxiously with hackles raised, her dog lowered to the ground. Following his example, she crouched behind a pile of pallets and surveyed the scene.
A shape with silver-shot red hair lay to the left of an oil barrel fireāTodd, she realized, heart lurchingāand two men were corralling a cluster of terrified children to the right.
āQuit your moaning,ā the taller man bellowed, waving a shotgun dangerously. āNo one cares about orphan refugees āround here, and we need you looking your best for the market, donāt we?ā
When the other man started toward them with ropes in hand, both Miriel and Matteo acted on instinct. They leapt past Todd into the firelight, Matteoās charge sending rope-man scrambling toward the river. The other man had just started to swing his shotgun toward Miriel when her airborne dagger sunk into his hand. He roared and lost his grip on the gun, sending it flying to his right. Enraged, he looked for his attacker.
āReally, old lady?ā he seethed.
Miriel had faced dragons before, but never without a weapon. A cold defeat twisted her gut. Her brother was right. This world didnāt need a has-been hero past her prime.
āI think you mean, āChosen One.āā Todd! Gentle, introverted, mechanic Todd stood with shotgun raised in steady hands.
The trafficker turned catfish-belly white, spluttering unintelligible pleas.
āI suggest you quit your moaning,ā Todd said, motioning Miriel toward the kids with a jerk of the chin. āNeed you looking your best for the authorities.ā
***
Miriel tended the pot at the stove, heart squeezing as Todd helped the children forget their horrors with tales of his dragon-slaying, little-big sister. Matteo, the incorrigible beggar, rested his head in the tiniest girlās lap, eyes drooping pathetically. The childās giggle was a pure, healing sound, and Mirielās worry eased.
āNow, Todd.ā She fixed her brother with a stern look. āI mightāve saved that world, but youāre the hero in this one.ā
The children cheered, and Todd looked at his hands, shy pride in his gaze.
Belly lit with a new fire, Miriel grabbed her ladle. This world might not need her knives, but it most certainly needed her stew. She winked at her guests. āI hope you kids are hungry.ā





I definitely want to read more of this story!
Glad to hear it! There’s so much more that could be written about Miriel.
Oh I like this and the brother-sister bond is really appealing! Nice job!
Thank you, V!
This is a beautiful story! I love the redemption they both get!
Thank you. We need more quiet heroes!
I think you’ve just invented a new form of paper-rock-scissors.
It’s called “Dog, Rope, Dagger, Todd, Shotgun!”
The rules are:
– Both Shotgun and Rope beats Todd.
– Dog beats rope.
– Dagger beats shotgun.
– Todd with Shotgun beats Dagger and Rope.
– Dog and Todd tie
We’re playtesting it now, I’ll let you know how it goes.
I am eagerly waiting your report.
Results are in. Family split worse than the big Monopoly fight of 2015. I think you need to rethink the rules.
On the one hand, I’m sorry for your family split. On the other, the fact that this game I (apparently) invented can rival Monopoly’s cutthroat capabilities has me quite satisfied.
Ahhh! I love Chosen One stories after they’ve fulfilled their duty! I really love this story, Andrea! So good.
Thank you! SO much to unpack in a story like this.
I love this story so much! š
Yay! I’m so glad.
“…all the subtlety of a drunken dragon…” My neighbor used to raise Saint Bernards, and as someone who’s been knocked down by one (it was trying to say hello) I’d say this was well put.
Oh, GOOD. I’ve never personally interacted with Saint Bernards, so I’m glad it rang true.
This Miriel story does her description proud. This is the type of story I had hoped for when I read the character.
This is so encouraging! I was immediately won over by her character and I’m so glad I captured it!
Fantastic! I experienced many emotions as I read it and wanted the story to continue. Well written and very entertaining.
Thank you so much for reading!
How fun! There is def more story to be had here and I hope I get to read it š
I adored this character that Gillian Bronte Adams created. She put so much thought into her!
Fantastic story, Andrea! I loved your take on Miriel and Matteo.
Thank you! they are a wonderful duo.
Dragon skin jackets, shotguns, defeating traffickers⦠this was my kind of story. Great take on Miriel, Andrea! Poor Matteo just wants some meat⦠instead he gets a potato. Maybe donāt drool everywhere next time, Matteo.
Your Matteo comment is so funny because my dog will literally do anything for a potato. But I realize now that that’s maybe not a normal thing for a dog? š
Nice redemption angle, and I liked how you incorporated a sibling and gave him a chance to be a hero like Miriel.
So much to unpack in Miriel’s backstory, hey? Like the family she left behind.
What a great idea giving Miriel a brother! Loved this take on Miriel. Stew certainly can do a lot of good in the world.
Thank you! She just seemed like she needed a brother who was the total opposite of her, someone who had quietly lived under her shadow.
I love their relationshipāas complicated as it now is! Todd is such a sweet hero and I want to hear all about Miriel’s past!
Thanks, Em! Todd is an absolute teddy bear. A toddy bear.
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