By H. L. Davis
I settle my giant form deep in the white sand, smirking with satisfaction as the mermaids’ shouts of rage continue to ring out across the water. Perhaps they are right to be a little vexed; I did, after all, startle them from their play in the lagoon, chasing them about and snapping my great jaws. But what do they expect a mighty predator like me to do when I’m hunting for lunch and see their tails glimmering like fat, delectable fish?
Oh well. Too bad they didn’t find the game as delightful as I did.
My belly now full of rainbow fish, I relax and close my eyes, the sun’s rich golden rays soaking deep into my scales. The distant yells have faded away, leaving only the sound of lapping water and occasional screech of a jungle bird to interrupt the peace.
Neverland—sweet, sweet paradise—why did it take me so long to find you?
“You’re from the London Zoo, aren’t you?”
So much for my afternoon nap.
I lazily open one eye to find a thin figure standing before me on the sandbar—ragged clothes, a mop of dark hair, and dirt smudged on his nose.
A Lost Boy.
If I could issue a solitary complaint about my beautiful new island home, it would be the presence of these arrogant little pests. Once every few days since my arrival, they think themselves oh so clever to poke me with sticks while I slumber, jeering and laughing until my temper prevails and I try to bite them. In the end, they always take the easy way out and fly too high for me to reach.
And the worst of the bunch is that blasted leader of theirs who cackles and crows like a vain rooster.
A growl rumbles deep in my throat as I scan the shore for the rest of them.
“It’s okay!” The lad raises his hands reassuringly, though his face is tense and troubled. “It’s only me today. And I don’t want to hurt you.”
My eyes narrow at the boy. But I wait, and he rambles on.
“I’m Jimmy. And I recognize you from back home. You were always my favorite animal at the zoo.” He ventures a smile, revealing gaps where a couple of his pathetically small teeth are missing. “So imagine my surprise to find you here—in Neverland! I almost couldn’t believe my eyes when I first saw you last week. Or was it last month?”
Jimmy’s dark brows scrunch together, and he shakes his head with a nervous laugh. “Anyway, you must have been very clever. Found some secret portal not even the fairies know about!”
If he expects me to share the secret place, he’s a fool. Not that he would be able to reach it, as humans are completely inept at the art of prolonged submersion. Still, I can’t help but grin.
I am quite a clever crocodile.
“And that’s why I’m here. You see”—his voice sinks to a whisper as his body lowers to the sand—“I want to go home. I have for a long while. But I don’t remember the way, and Peter says if I mention it to him again, or cry, or lose any more teeth, he’ll…” Jimmy swallows. “He’ll cut off my hand. He can’t abide any talk of missing family, you see. Or any sign of change. Growing older.”
So, Peter Pan is precisely the villain I suspected. But then, I’ve always been a phenomenal judge of character.
Glancing around, Jimmy reaches in his pocket and brings out a ticking golden object hanging from a chain. I stiffen. This item is one I recognize from the hands of zookeepers.
“This is my father’s watch. He’s a captain in the Royal Navy. At least—I’m pretty sure. I’ve scratched the word ‘HELP’ on the back here.” Jimmy shows me the markings and continues, “I know if my father sees this, he’ll keep looking for me. He’ll find a way to bring me home.” He blinks fast, rubbing a grubby hand across his cheek. “Anyway, I thought maybe you could find a way to get it to him, or at least, back to London.”
Back to London? I almost hiss at the boy. Why would I do such a reckless thing now that I’m finally free?
But something in his blue eyes—the desperate look of a captive—makes my large reptilian heart soften. Jimmy may not be in a cage like I once was. But he’s a prisoner nonetheless.
I open my jaws wide. Jimmy stares for a moment, then laughs. “Thanks, Big Ben!”
He tosses me the watch. I catch and choke it down, feeling it slide down my throat, cold and heavy. My body unexpectedly begins to pulse to its steady tick-tock, tick-tock. I groan.
What a sentimental idiot this world of endless summer has made me.





This is a great story. Poor Jimmy, though! I hope he finds his way home.
Thank you! And whether Jimmy makes it home or not…is definitely in question. 😉🪝
I love this take on Neverland! Big Ben is such a good croc after all. Great job!
Yes, there’s a soft heart under that scaly exterior. And thank you!
My first time reading a story from a crocodile’s perspective! Very unique!
Haha, and it was my first time writing from a crocodile’s perspective. 😉 Lots of fun!
Oh I like this spin on Peter Pan!! I love all the familiar-yet-different elements, the crocodile, the reason he’s ticking, the mermaids. Excellent work!
Thanks so much, Vanessa! 💕
I loved this story. It’s so fun to give the crocodile a tale of his own!
Most definitely! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. 😊
I love your creativity! Such a great story!
Thank you, Allison!
I love all the forshadowing in this story. Well write my dear.
Thanks! Love you. ❤️
Oh, this was even better than I expected! I LOVE it! Wonderful job.
Thank you, Elizabeth! That means a lot to me.
Nice twist on Nederland! Well done!
Thanks so much!
Great story! I could definitely read more with Big Ben as the main character!
Thank you so much, Jess! 😊
Not a Peter Pan person, but I enjoyed reading your story. Interesting take on how a certain James’ watch came to be crocodile food. 😉
Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read Big Ben.
Fun story! I like the unexpected turn of the crocodile’s motives. The acknowledgement of what makes a prison was great as well. Excellent!
Thanks so much, Arlan! 😊
Great to learn the crocodile’s POV.
Thank you! Writing from his perspective was lots of fun.
Fun Captain Hook orgin story!
Thank you! 😁
Oh, how I love this story! A Neverland tale told from the crocodile’s perspective? A twist on who’s the villain of the story? Love love love!
Sidenote: since you seem to be a fan of Peter Pan retellings, you should check out the anthology The Never Tales. 😊
Thanks so very much! ☺️ And yes, I actually have the e-books of The Never Tales and hope to read them soon!
I LOVED this!!!
I’m so glad!