By Andi Davis
The carriage rolled into sight, its glossy emblem flashing like a beacon on its side. A loud crack split the deceptive quiet of the forest as the front wheel fell into a concealed hole.
“Now!” Elsie yelled.
A couple dozen bodies emerged from their hiding places and descended on the conveyance and outlying guards. The first to reach the target cut the horses loose and slapped them on their way. Others engaged the few troops that filed out of the now-open door.
“Remember the objective,” Elsie shouted as she leapt into the mix, ducking under an arm and heading for the dark interior of the carriage. She’d nearly pulled herself inside when a fist came out of the shadows and slammed into her cheek. The ground rose to meet her with enough force to drive the air from her lungs. She curled into a ball to avoid being trampled while she relearned how to breathe.
A gleaming sword emerged from the vehicle, the familiar face behind it screwed up in confusion. “Elizabeth?”
Elsie gained her feet and adjusted her grip on her own sword. “Edward,” she wheezed, then cleared her throat and took a deeper breath. “I didn’t realize you were in the habit of hitting ladies.”
“I didn’t expect to be dealing with any.”
She took advantage of his momentary discomfort and knocked the sword from his hand, then pointed her blade at his neck. “No offense, Edward, but we’ll be taking the contents of that lovely carriage.”
While one of her comrades tied his hands behind his back, Edward gave her a long look. “Elizabeth, be reasonable. The King won’t allow this.”
The corner of her mouth lifted. “Then it’s a good thing I didn’t ask his permission.”
Killian strode into the council chamber and headed for his father’s chair. Even though it had been months since the funeral, everything in the place still felt like his father’s, from the furniture to the people. Of course, all the problems that came with the crown were most certainly Killian’s now.
One of his father’s advisors straightened. “Your Majesty, the shipment of gold from the Winter Palace was ambushed. One of your men was seriously injured and two of the thieves were killed. The others absconded with the money and vanished into the forest.”
Killian kept his face impassive, but his eyes darted to the newest member of the council. The Naevian “ambassador” raised a scarred eyebrow. Avoiding the piercing gaze, Killian asked the room, “Do we know anything about these criminals?”
“Captain Randolph recognized the leader as Lady Elizabeth.”
This time he couldn’t hide the flash of exasperation.
“That woman has been inciting all kinds of trouble, Your Majesty.”
“She often does,” he muttered. Louder, he said, “Send a contingent into the forest to track them down. And send a missive to the steward of Blasgrove Estate to inquire about the account balance.”
“Yes, sire.”
Everyone rose with Killian. However, the ambassador was the first to follow him from the room. With his thick shoulders and array of weapons, it was obvious the man was no diplomat.
The Naev kept at his heels. Killian could practically feel the other man’s eyes on his back, so he took a circuitous route to his bedchamber.
Rounding a corner, his gait faltered. The ambassador was leaning against his door, using a dagger to clean under his fingernails. When he saw Killian, he straightened. “Tick tock, Highness,” the man said, coming towards him. “Tick. Tock.” He knocked into Killian’s shoulder as he passed.
Heart pounding, Killian entered his bedchamber and bolted the door. Where was he going to get more money? How was he going to pay off his father’s debts?
Rubbing his shoulder, he paced around the room before stopping at the window. Below, his people rushed about. If he didn’t find a new source of income quickly, one Naev would become thousands and his people would pay the debt with their lives.
A soft noise gave little warning before cold metal pressed against his throat.
“You really should have better security around here,” said a familiar voice.
Irritated, he knocked the blade away and turned to face his antagonist. “Some of my guards aren’t at their best at the moment.”
Elsie put her hands on her hips. “Hey, I left Edward in better condition than he did me.”
Killian spotted the bruise on her cheek, then shook his head. “The man was doing his job. Protecting the realm.”
“And I was the one protecting the people of this realm.”
“That’s exactly what I’m trying to do.” Desperation tinged his voice.
“And how is that? By making your leaders fat and happy while the rest of the world starves?”
In a soft voice, he said, “No, Elsie. By keeping our people from a war that would kill many more than the meager food rations will.”
The anger drained from her eyes. “Why didn’t you tell me?”
“Kings don’t normally share state secrets with rebel leaders.”
She looked away. “Yes, well… There’s never an easy answer, is there?”
“We want the same thing, Elsie.” He stepped forward and grasped her hands. “If we work together, we just might achieve it.”
Her eyes roamed over his face. “Perhaps,” she whispered. The color faded from her cheeks, highlighting the bruise.
He reached out and gently brushed his thumb across it. “Are you okay?”
She nodded.
“Have you already given the money away?” he asked.
“No. Not all of it.”
His lips held the hint of a smile as he bent and brushed them across hers. “Is there any way I can convince you to give me the rest?”
Elsie huffed out a breath before twining her arms around his neck. “Stranger things have happened.” She gave him a slow smile. “And you are pretty good at negotiating. I’m sure we can find a compromise,” she said as she leaned into him and pressed her mouth to his.





Exciting and daring with twists and turns.
Thank you!
Great twists in this story!
Thanks a lot!
This had me on the edge of my seat and wanting more. I am totally in love with the characters presented and the conflicts that they face. The writing style and descriptiveness elude to all the intrigue and deception that surround this plot.
Thank you for your kind words. :o)
The writing style and descriptiveness elude to all the intrigue and deception that surround this plot.
Awwww, I ship them! I love Elsie’s strong, feisty personality.
I’m so glad you like Elsie! She was fun to write.
This is such a good story! It made me want to read even more about their personal stories, how they have gotten to this point, and what they will do next. Great job!
I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
Would love to hear the rest of this story! Great job – can’t wait to read more!
Thank you so much!
Love the ending! Well written and presented. Can I have more?
Thanks! I hope so. ;o)
Love the rebel leader, she sounds awesome. Interesting and exciting story!
I’m pleased that you like the heroine.
Those Naevs have me nervous…
Good! ;o)
I really enjoyed this story. I liked the characters and the interesting twists, which is no small feat taking into consideration the length of the story. Thanks!
I’m so glad you liked it!
Fun and exciting! The descriptions are beautifully written. I would like to read more.
Thank you! I hope to be able to give you more.
Great snapshot of a promising story. Ms. Davis certainly has the knack for storytelling. More please!
Thank you so much!
I love Elsie’s quick-witted tongue. I’d like to learn more about the connections between Elsie and the king. Nice twists!
I’m glad you enjoyed the characters!
Love the character Elsie. Always nice to see a strong women in literature.
I’m pleased that you like her. I liked writing about her. :o)
What happens next?!? Would love to read more of this exciting tale!
I’m so glad you want more.
The surprise at the end was a great plot twist!! Also, a great use of vocabulary! Way to go Andi!!
I’m so happy that you liked it.
Amazing ending, i love the unique names
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Great!
I liked the story, Andi, and your writing style. Keep it up.
Thanks a lot!
Great snappy dialogue, and good job setting up characters in a short period of time! This seems like a time period you know a lot about. Can’t wait to read more!
Thank you for the encouragement!
Great short story! I wish there was more.
Loved this read. Would like the rest!
I’m so glad you liked it!
This is so exciting and we’ll written, I wish it could continue. I very much would like to read more.
Thank you so much!