By Abigail Falanga
Rank upon rank, we stand ready.
Faces set and stern, wings unfurled, eyes locked forward, swords at our sides—though they will dance like flames in our hands at the first sign of trouble. We have seen battle, terrible and costly, against ruthless enemies. We will leap into combat again, if threatened, if met with resistance.
But that is not our mission.
Our new orders are to initiate something far more important. This is no territory skirmish. This is more imperative than the fate of a planet or the strategic scythe of a nebula.
The Invasion has begun.
The General approaches with a thunderous clap of his layered wings, shoulders set and movements swift and fiery. Anticipation pulses through my pinions as I leap to meet him.
“What news, sir?” I inquire. “Is the order given?”
“Not yet, Ronen. Not yet.” The eyes on every surface of General Lavi’s massive body peer out endlessly, seeing threats from afar as they form and roil. “The armies of the kings are still on the move, and the sentries report princes amassing resistance. Pieces have begun to fall into place, but… not yet.”
We discuss the strategy to deal with the new menace and once again review maneuvers my cohort has practiced again and again. Then General Lavi departs, and we continue our watch.
Time has no meaning outside the dimension of death, but the wait is heavy.
We are ready.
Concentric wheels driven by wind will carry us across the boundless spaces.
But we wait.
At last, General Lavi swoops into view from among the arches of the hall, draws his sword from its scabbard to hold it aloft, and cries, “The order is given! Depart!”
We rise into the air with a noise like a thousand drums and launch. I am at the head of our terrible squadrons—I have the central role in our most vital campaign, a responsibility which both appalls and brings fierce delight.
Sweeping through vast stretches of space, we roar in readiness. The Invasion has begun. The enemy armies stand no chance.
But they are not idle.
They meet us in force as we cross dimensional boundaries, but we are prepared. Two contingents break off from our main army and plunge through the dust of the nebula. They clash with clattering arms and cries, leaping fire and erupting fumes.
The enemy distracted, we push through their divided forces and fly on in redoubled speed.
As we near our destination, the mechanics of the Invasion are at last apparent. The spinning gravity and competing cosmic masses have clicked together into a beacon, signaling the Invasion’s coming.
We, however, carry on to the next stage.
Nearing the planet, we also face the next hurdle. The adversaries in all their cruel strength are gathered as thickly here as flies around a corpse. The vanguard of our army charges forward, meeting them in a fray. But our allies have done their work and, but for a few roaming bands directly ahead of us, the enemy is occupied elsewhere on the planet’s surface. Perhaps they don’t even suspect that the Invasion will be here on this part of the landmass, or that it will be now.
They are wrong.
Even now, it comes.
The dimensions of time and space slip into place around us as we enter the atmosphere. The planet’s star is on the far side, and here everything lies in darkness. The indigenous intelligent species lies still, latent through the night.
We pass cities where kings and emperors mass, scheme, and plot.
We pass armies, which rest untroubled.
We come to a desolate place, near a once-great city fallen into disrepair and occupied by hostile overlords.
Near a town where, to our extradimensional eyes, we can see the Invasion shaking the very fabric of this world.
We arrive in the restive silence, to a location where a few men remain wakeful.
There we stop.
My comrades, warlike and prepared, take up position over the surrounding hills.
I drop down upon the wakeful men and rip open their vision to realities beyond their comprehension.
This is the moment!
The Invasion has come.
And I speak: “Fear not! For see now—I bring you a good report of great joy, which shall be for all people. For this day in the city of David there has been born unto you a Savior, which is Christ the Lord.”





Absolute chills from this story. <3 I love it.
A wonderful perspective and a wonderful story!
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!! I love this so much!!!!
This is one epic Christmas story
This is amazing!! I’m guessing the song is God Rest You Merry Gentlemen.
Ha, I completely forgot about guessing the song! Is it “Hark! The Herald Angels Sing”?
Good guess, Jebraun! That isn’t THE song, but it certainly was a song that inspired the writing.
Zachary – you are correct!! Many of the later stanzas of “Hark” are especially relevant
Zachary, you’re correct! If you’re a member of the Havok Horde, you’ll be automatically entered into a drawing for a $10 Amazon gift card at the end of the month.
This is /AMAZING/. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Thank you so much for reading!
This story is unusual, because it’s a collaboration with my dad, Rod Falanga. He really ought to have co-credit for it! When my siblings and I were little, he told it to us and it stuck with me – that idea of the angels waiting in the heavens for the command to carry the news of the baby Jesus’ birth to the shepherds. What an image! The heavenly hosts coming to the most humble of men…
I wrote it up with my own twists, which I thought were part of the story all along. And the results you see!
The song to go with this story has already been guessed. It’s “Hark the Herald Angels Sing.” (I like the Getty version.) But I also was inspired by many other classic Christmas carols: “God Rest Ye Merry, Gentlemen,” “Angels We Have Heard on High,” and “Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silence” (which I quote a few times in the story). And basically the entire “Christmas” album by Michael W. Smith.
Merry Christmas to all, and glory to God in the highest!
Abigail Falanga, and Rod Falanga
Very cool! I love this angle of the Christmas story. I’d never considered what battles the angels might have had in getting to the earth to spread the Message.
Love it!
Love the ending
So engaging! Excellent!
Wow! Fantastic alternate POV for the Christmas story. Such drama and intensity.
I can feel this story. It carries carries lot of weight and I can sense that in your writing. Very beautiful 😍
Gorgeous!
The descriptions are so rich and full of movement, and the intriguing central concept puts a dramatic new perspective to a (to many people) familiar story — a many, many-eyed perspective.