By Abigail Falanga
I was nearly done raking the lawn when someone plump, perky, and purple-clad appeared in a gust right there, scattering leaves.
โWho are you?โ I wielded the rake.
She shook a leaf from her skirts. โYour fairy godmother, dear.โ
โFairy godmotherโ? But I didn’t know fairies were real.โ
โThat explains your rude surprise. I suppose part of it is my fault, for neglecting you so long. But I thought I’d make it up to you by sending you to the ball in style. Dress, hair, Lamborghini, the works.โ
โWhat ball?โ I gasped as an elegant asymmetrical gown of diaphanous silk cinched about me.
โThe ball for Camden Prince’s birthday, of course. Only the most dashing, eligible bachelor in town, with a trust fund worth billions. Just the thing to cheer you up!โ
A sleek car appeared out of nowhere, and she nudged me into it.
โBut I’m already happy.โ
โYou can’t possibly be, in those old work shoes.โ The fairy godmother waved her wand. A pair of supportive, comfortable glass slippers encased my feet. โNow, get along! The directions are in the GPS. And you know the rulesโฆโ
โBe back before midnight.โ I fastened the seatbelt, playing along.
I drew near the Prince estateโdriving through a manicured woodland that made my high-end neighborhood look like the slumsโbefore my thoughts calmed enough to be coherent. I’m looking forward to this. It’s nice to be out on my own for a change.
I pulled up and mounted the steps of the exquisite mansion buzzing with partygoers, fearing I might look out-of-place. I glimpsed my reflection in a mirrored door, and was more than reassured. I looked niceโfantastic, even. My weariness from the day’s work was gone. The gown set off my slim curves. My hair was perfect.
Giggling, I entered a ballroom crowded with the ultra-rich. Dancing, good foodโ I’m going to enjoy this break from routine.
I turned around, mouth full of canape, and there he was. Camden Prince. Chiseled jaw, strong shouldersโฆ
โHi,โ he said.
โMmmphmm!โ I swallowed.
โCare to dance?โ Not waiting for a response, he lifted my hand, making the bruise on my wrist protest, and swept me into a waltz. โYou have a name?โ
โHelena,โ I whispered.
โI’m sorry, butโโ He laughed a little. โโhave we met before? I think I would have remembered.โ
Lame line, beautiful idiot. โNo, we’ve never met.โ
โSo, who are you with, Helena? I mean, what do you do?โ
Clearly, conversation was not his strong point. โMy parents were professors at the university. I’m working my way through school at the community college.โ
Camden smiled with more than a touch of disdain. โThe community college?โ
I leveled my brows, shyness gone. โSomething wrong with that?โ
โNot at all,โ he appeased. โWhat are you working toward, Helena?โ
โDesign. I plan to start my own business, andโโ
He smirked. โYou do realize how hard it is to launch a business, right?โ
โAs a matter of fact, I do.โ I pulled back. โI’ve been taking classes in business management.โ
โRight. At the community college. But there are many moving parts of a market economyโฆโ
Richsplaining? Really? How would you know as much as I do about the market economy, with your trust fund managed by highly paid professionals?
The waltz ended, and we stopped at a refreshment table as he droned on. I reached for a beer. Camden pushed it away and placed a bubbly pink cocktail in my hand. โYou’ll like this better.โ
So much for dreams of romance!
Long before midnight, I was back in my magical Lamborghini, driving home sans stardust.
The house was empty. My stepsisters were still out with their worthless boyfriends; their mom wouldn’t be back from her conference until after the weekend.
I stormed through the hall, fuming so much that I tripped, shattering one of the glass slippers.
What do I care? I swept it and Camden Prince out of my mind.
Two weeks later, I stared at the results of my latest test. Sixty-four percent. The instructor had scrawled, โYou could have done better.โ
โOf course I can do better!โ My parents had taught me to study. If only I could carve out more time from taking care of the house and avoid the stress of my stepsisters’ insults and my stepmother’s cruel handsโ
The doorbell rang. I wiped away a tear as I went to answer it.
Camden Prince stood on the doorstep.
I clutched the handle to keep from slamming the door in his face. As my stepmother never failed to remind me, it wasn’t my door. She had control of my assets until I was twenty-one.
โHelena!โ Camden smiled sheepishly. โI’m glad it’s you.โ
โYes?โ I inquired, impersonal as the maid I looked.
โI came to apologize. I was having a terrible day, but that’s no excuse for behaving like a jerk. I’m sorry.โ
An apology? Unexpected, but not quite enough to earn a second chance. โIs that all?โ
โI also came to offer you a microloan. Ten thousand dollars to get you and your business running.โ
โI don’t need your help,โ I flared.
โThat black eye argues otherwise.โ
My hand flew to my face. โThat’s nothing. It’s justโโ
โNone of my business, I know. But it matches the bruises on your arm the other day. Look, I’m not offering you anything or asking anything of you, other than the chance to help you build a life and career for yourself. There’s nothing wrong with accepting help out of a terrible situation. Everyone would respect you for doing it.โ
โBefore I say anythingโโ I drew a shaky breath. โโhow did you find me?โ
Camden chuckled. โWhen my fairy godfather finally showed up this morning, he let me choose any gift I wanted, to make up for being late. I asked to find youโthe most beautiful, intelligent, capable woman I had ever met. Turns out, magic glass slippers are traceable. Fairy GPS.โ






I love the modern-day Cinderella aspect! And how he’s helping her at the end. So sweet. :D
Oh, thank you! It was fun to do a bit of a retelling, with a twist ;)
– Abigail Falanga
This is the MOST FUN Cinderella retelling I’ve probably ever read!!! I love all the twists on the original tale. *heart eyes*
Thank you so much!
There are so many Cinderella retellings out there that coming in as “Most Fun” is definitely a privilege.
Fainting in delight!
– Abigail Falanga
Aww, he’s not so bad after all! Sweet ending, without falling in the trap of being sappy. I love it!
Thank you!
And, no, Camden really isn’t too bad of a guy. Though having a bad day is not an excuse for being rude! lol
– Abigail Falanga
Aw, that ended up being really sweet! Nice job, Abigail! :)
Thank you!
Yeah, my sister made me put a good ending on it. I love how it turned out!
– Abigail Falanga
Ahhhh I love this story especially the ending! Nice job :D
Thank you!
– Abigail Falanga
I really enjoy stories that play with Cinderella in new ways.
Thanks! And, yeah, it’s amazing how much potential lies in such a simple story. It was really fun to put my own twist on it :D
– Abigail Falanga
Good one, Abigail! I love the new twist on an old tale.
Thank you so much!
– Abigail Falanga
I absolutely love this!
Oh, good! I’m glad you love it. That’s wonderful to hear
Thanks!
– Abigail Falanga
Hehehe, fairy GPS! That’s awesome!
No idea what the song is…
Yeah, I thought that the “fairy GPS” was a fun idea. May have to use it again elsewhere! ;)
– Abigail Falanga
I hope you have all enjoyed this more whimsical dip into my quirky dream-world. A feminist Cinderella was my subconscious’s idea, but developing it into a comedy worked so much better than I expected! It’s a delight watching people giggle as they read this story.
Song Clue: Have a look for feminist songs of the ’70s – a golden time for feminist songs, in fact. I included a couple of little hints throughout. Look especially for ideas of disabused romanticism
“I Am Woman” by Helen Reddy?
I’m afraid not! Though I considered “I Am Woman,” it didn’t fit the slightly romantic spin I wanted for the story. Also, I didn’t really like listening to it (though that goes for the song I picked, too…)
Hehe :) I haven’t actually listened to the song, though I know of it. From the lyrics, I probably wouldn’t like it much.
It’s… ok. Bland for my taste, and that mellow 70s style of singing doesn’t fit the rebellion I would expect, given the lyrics.
Another hint: I don’t recognize the singer of “I Am Woman” – but the actual song is by a pair of singers who still have instant name-recognition ;)
Fun story. I loved the line, “But I’m already happy.”
Sure you are, Helena. Sooo happy ๐
Thanks so much!
– Abigail Falanga
Loved this story!!! ๐