By Andi Davis
The sinking sun cast the world in a sparkling, amber glow, and my skin prickled with the desire to bask in the radiance. Of their own accord, my fingers escaped the confines of the shadows and found the sun’s rays. A smile spread across my face as the warmth bathed my skin.
It didn’t last. The warmth quickly became a burning fire, accompanied by livid welts. Yanking my hand to my chest, I closed my eyes, gritted my teeth, and waited for the skin to heal.
Why did I torture myself this way? Why did I still feel the need to seek the sun?
Turning my back on the light, I entered my apartment, pulling a heavy curtain into place over the sliding door. I dressed for work quickly and was soon driving to the warehouse. Troy opened the back door for me, his trademark frown in place. “Russell’s waiting.”
“Russell’s always waiting,” I mumbled as I stalked deeper into the building, passing others going about their jobs. At the end of the hallway, I opened one half of a massive double-door into a room whose opulence contrasted sharply with the rest of the warehouse.
“You’re late,” said a cultured voice. The attire matched the tone, full of money and self-importance.
“The sun just set.”
“No, it set thirty minutes ago. If you slept here, you would be more readily available.”
Unlike his other employees, I refused to call the building home. Just as I refused to wear the expensive outfits he kept sending me. I lived for those tiny rebellions.
“What do you need?” I gritted out.
“Didn’t you see the packages in the hallway?”
I snorted. “Office supplies? That’s why you’re bent out of shape?”
The annoyance bled out of Russell’s face until I was staring at an expressionless statue. A frisson of fear raced up my spine.
“Do not disrespect me,” he said with chilling calm. “I am your Maker.”
As if I could forget. Nodding, I escaped to the hall closet and unboxed and organized paper, pens, and ink cartridges until I wished immortality was a myth.
Like clockwork, Troy came down the hall at nine, leading a woman to Russell’s office. I kept my eyes averted as she looked at me. They disappeared behind the doors, and I held my breath, wondering if she would simply provide a meal, able to go on with her life after a quick memory wipe, or if she too would cease to exist and become one of Russell’s lackeys.
Screams penetrated the door, which was expected. Masculine shouting followed, which was not.
“Jocelyn! Get in here!”
I flung open the door to find Troy huddled into himself, cradling his arm, and Russell holding onto the struggling, shrieking woman.
“Grab her,” Russell said in exasperation.
It didn’t make sense. He was much stronger than his “employees,” but he liked us to restrain his meals. I, however, had never done the restraining.
Slowly, I made my way forward and saw the problem. The woman’s army of bracelets must have been made of pure silver. It was so uncommon these days that Troy probably hadn’t considered it. Judging from the vicious burns on his forearm, he wouldn’t make that mistake again.
Russell dismissed him with a jerk of his head as I stepped behind the crying woman. Gingerly, I grabbed her upper arms, but when her struggles renewed, I realized I’d need more leverage. I wrapped my arms around her torso, avoiding the bracelets.
Stepping back, Russell straightened his clothing and smoothed his hair, obviously annoyed with the unscheduled drama. “There’s no need for all this,” he said, waving his hand as if to encompass all the emotion pouring from the woman. He came closer, nearly pressing his chest to hers. “It’s but a fleeting discomfort.”
That phrase ripped through my mind, unearthing long-buried pain. I’d heard it before. A lifetime ago.
Russell bared his fangs and lowered his head.
I felt the woman vibrating with fear in my arms and something shifted in my chest. I became her, transported back to the night my previous life ended.
A vicious savagery erupted, and I felt my fangs punch into my mouth. My vision colored with a red haze, and I experienced hatred as I never had before.
Shoving the woman aside, my fingers curled into claws and I lunged at Russell. His utter shock was my only advantage. A hissing sound filled the room, and I realized it was coming from me. I struck at his throat, my teeth sinking in like honed knives.
But that wasn’t the way to rid myself of him.
I threw him away from me—without releasing my bite—and was immediately covered in a wash of hot blood. He landed on the guest chair, splintering it with a loud crack. His wide eyes rolled as his hand came up to cover the gaping wound in his throat.
Darting forward, I grabbed a broken chair leg. Russell’s eyes flashed, and his breath exploded out of him as I slammed the makeshift stake into his chest.
It needed more force. I moved to put my whole weight into it when he rasped, “But I created you.”
I met his gaze one last time.
“Exactly.”
When I threw myself onto the length of wood, it pierced his grizzled heart, and I watched in fascination as he disintegrated.
Breathing heavily, I stood amidst the ashes, hardly able to believe what I’d done.
He was gone. I was free.
The seconds ticked by as I waited for a mantle of peace to envelop me.
Something tickled down my forearm. Turning it over, I found blood leaking from a cut and wondered when I’d been hurt. As I watched, the wound knit together, stopping the flow. My breath hitched.
Instead of peace, reality settled over me. There was no reset button. I was what he’d made me, and what I was could not be undone.
I was consigned to the dark.
Forevermore.





This was an involving, gripping story and I admire the way you incorporated the creator theme into the thriller.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Having never wanted to hug a vampire before, I find myself in a difficult conundrum. Poor Jocelyn. :'(
Haha! I’m glad it made you think. :o)
I don’t want her to give up! Send her a piece of lore about an antidote or even a way to die. Please!
Compelling tale.
Thank you! I’m pleased that it moved you.
Love it. Well written. Exciting. Give me more!
Thanks for the encouragement!
That story was so gripping right from the beginning. The descriptions were very excellent.
I’m glad it grabbed ahold of you. Thanks!
I went from curiosity to intrigue to shock and ended with more curiosity. Kudos to your talented writing to take me on such a journey in a matter of minutes!
I’m so happy that you enjoyed the journey.
No taking a break once you’ve started. I could have read on for another hour without a break. Great use of volcabulary.
Thank you so much for your kind words!
I loved the descriptions and details. I would like to read more about Jocelyn.
Thank you! I’ll try to bring you more. ;o)
Liked the beginning, it drew me in right away. The tension of the story was palpable and kept me wanting to read on.
Thank you so much!
Excellent. The range of emotions covered and plot turns really kept me engaged. Keep it up!
I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
It begins and ends with intrigue and then leaves you wanting more. The descriptions vividly transport you Jocelyn’s world and state of mind. Please tell me there is more in her story.
Thank you for the encouragement! I’m so happy that you enjoyed Jocelyn’s world.
This is such an amazing story with incredible twist and turns. I enjoyed the plot on this quick thriller ! Want to read more of this and see what her future holds !!
Thanks so much for your interest.
This is an awesome short story ! I loved the intriguing way the author connected this thriller to main character. It gives an inner perspective into her mind and thoughts. Really want to read more and see her fate !!
Well written !!
I’m glad you enjoyed getting into Jocelyn’s head. She was fun to write.
I loved the story. Need to read more.
Thanks a lot!
I liked this story. Jocelyn is an intriguing character.
I’m glad you enjoyed her!
Loved it! Very descriptive and had me engaged and wanting more right out of the gate.
Thank you for the kind words.
Compelling story and very well written! Well done!
Thank you!
To take what only exists in the mind and make it matter in the minds of others is a true gift. I quiet enjoyed the journey. Well done
Profound! Thank you very much.
Wow, that was intense! Great work.
Thank you!
I want the rest of the story. Wonderful!
I’m glad you liked it. :o)