By Jordan Foster
Where is she? I crouched on the roof of a flat stone building overlooking a cobbled alley, pulling the brim of my cavalier hat closer to my nose. She promised to be here an hour ago. I rose slowly. I should get back to the zeppelin now. The crew will be wondering what happened to me. I could only imagine what theyâd do if they believed that the Blue Baron had been arrested. I snorted. That would never happen.
I turned to the horizon and gazed at our zeppelin floating on the outskirts of the city. I came all this way for nothing.
Then, a small thump sounded from below my squatting perch. I whipped around and grinned at the young dark-haired woman hurrying out of the alley. She turned toward me slightly, pulling her white scarf from underneath her trench coat.
âAfternoon, Scarf. Not even going to greet me?â I dropped from the roof, snagging the parcel sheâd dropped as promised.
âSeven oâclock, Blue,â she answered curtly.
Of course sheâd remind me of my later engagement instead of offer pleasantries. I shook my head, then secured my blue mask. âSeven. Right.â
I clambered back onto the building and sprinted across the rooftops to the cityâs edge. I had a party to crash.
* * *
Florian barged into the back room of the zeppelin just as I finished changing.
He snorted the second he saw me. âWho let a filthy Higardian noble up here?â
I rolled my eyes. âVery funny.â
Iâd been forced to exchange my blue mask with a black one, but worst of all was the red neckerchief tucked under my black waistcoat. I wished Iâd never opened Scarfâs parcel. She wouldnât even let me keep my blue feather; sheâd provided a black one instead.
âBlue is unacceptable at the ball.â Scarf had only laughed when I frowned at her. âDonât look at me like that; itâs your fault Higardians hate blue.â Being an infamous nuisance came at a price.
âWell, have fun on your date.â Florian shrugged.
âItâs not a date! This is about stealing the Bonds Accord. Elantra will be ransacked by merciless Forden raiders the second that treaty is signed.â I exhaled slowly. âI canât let that happen.â
âOh, I thought you were meeting Scarf, my apologies.â Florian nudged me with a snicker. âGo get that confounded paper.â
I nodded, inhaling slowly. I had no choice.
* * *
I easily slipped into the palace with the flood of guests. No guard wanted to invoke the wrath of a noble by not remembering them, so they let me through without question. Now I had to find Scarfâs contact, Ruby. Why is finding a flashy red-headed girl so hard? All I could find were blondes and brunettes. Not a single ruby in the bunch.
Then, I saw her. Her red waves bounced with every step of her clicking heeled boots. Her pitch-black dress trailed on the marble floor, her layered skirts swishing, but what kept me staring was the white scarf tied tastefully around her neck.
âScarf?â I breathed when she waltzed within earshot, receiving an annoyed look in return. What is she doing here? I thought I was meeting Ruby. I cleared my throat and then grabbed her hand. âMay I have the honor of dancing with you, miss?â
She whipped her hair into my face. âYou may.â
I whisked her onto the floor with the rest of the swaying couples, one hand on her shoulder and the other on her waist. I stared at the Bonds Accord displayed just off the dance floor.
Scarf cleared her throat. âLovely spread they have.â She nodded toward the tables full of fruit from the fall harvest.
Why must she be so formal? She knew it was me. âYes, I suppose. Thereâs a strange lack of blueberries.â
She choked, clearly hiding a laugh, then quieted her voice. âSince when do they have blueberries at harvest festivals, Blue?â
âOh, never, but I did what you asked, didnât I?â I grinned at her. âWhy didnât you tell me you were Ruby?â
Her cheeks flushed for a moment. âIâd hoped you wouldnât recognize me, and we could do this professionally.â She shook her wigged head. âLook, letâs make this quick. Get the Accord and get out; thatâs the plan.â
âOur cover is still intact, Scarf. Canât we dance a bit longer?â I twirled her into a dip, gazing into her hazel eyes.
A smile leapt onto her lips but disappeared seconds after it formed. âNot here. Youâre going to blow both of our covers.â
I pulled her upright. âThen where?â
âYou know where to find me.â She removed one hand off my shoulder to retrieve a trio of smoke grenades from underneath her skirts. She placed them between my hand and her waist. âGo before we lose our chance.â
I nodded. Time to save Elantra.
I inhaled sharply, steering us as indirectly as I could toward the Accordâs pedestal. Then, I dropped my first grenade. Bang!
I released Scarf and seized the scroll in the thick of startled cries. The second grenade obscured my dash for the window, and the third I hurled at the delicate pane, shattering it, using the last of the sooty plumes to cover my exit.
I tumbled out of the window and onto the ground, casting one last glance into the chaos of the ballroom. Flames spiraling up the drapes pierced the first of my smoke grenades, adding to the chaos. The fireâs distraction wouldnât last when they saw the broken glass, but Iâd be long gone by then.
I picked myself up, tucked the scroll into my waistcoat, and made my escape. A grin grew on my face as I dashed through the streets, November air nipping at my nose. The Higardians wouldnât be getting aid from the raiders after all, and they had the Blue Baron to thank. I chuckled slightly. The Blue Baron and Scarf.





OH MY GOODNESS, JORDAN!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much!!! I’m so glad you caught it this time!!!
Aaaah, I so enjoyed their dynamic! I hope we get to see more of these two sometime. đ
Thank you, Em!!!
Oooooooo I love it!!! (And totally ship them-)
Thank you!!! (Yes, I ship so hard XD)
I was so invested in the story that I didnât want it to end! Canât wait for your next work Jordan! <333
Another amazing short story! So proud of you!
Thank you!
Exciting story in a fascinating world.
Thanks for reading!
By virtue of BB calling his dirigible a “Zeppelin” we can firmly conclude Count Zeppelin is a canonical character in this world, which strikes me as really funny.
Oh, I hadn’t realized they were named after someone. That is funny!
Jordan, this story is absolutely captivating! I couldnât help but notice the depth of themes and character dynamics woven into your narrative, which brought to mind several parallels to biblical truths and concepts.
The relationship between the Blue Baron and Scarf struck me as a beautiful reflection of the complementary roles within the body of Christ (1 Corinthians 12:12-27). Scarfâs strategic wisdom paired with the Baronâs bold execution reminded me of Moses and Aaron working together to fulfill Godâs mission (Exodus 4:14-16). Itâs a dynamic thatâs both engaging and spiritually resonant.
The Baronâs high-risk mission to save Elantra aligns with biblical calls to sacrificially protect and serve others (Proverbs 31:8-9). His courage reminded me of David standing up to Goliath (1 Samuel 17:45-47)ânot for personal gain, but for the greater good. Itâs inspiring to see characters embodying these traits in such a vivid, adventurous way.
The world-building in this story also carries meaningful symbolism. The Higardians and Forden raiders could represent worldly powers, echoing the spiritual battle described in Ephesians 6:12. The zeppelin, serving as a refuge and base of operations, feels akin to the churchâa place of preparation and support for missions into the world (Psalm 46:1-3; Hebrews 10:24-25). Itâs like Noahâs ark in a sense, safeguarding its crew as they work to preserve what is good and just (Genesis 7:16).
Scarfâs dual identity as Ruby adds an intriguing layer of complexity, reflecting the tension of being âin the world but not of itâ (John 17:15-16). Her strategic disguise is reminiscent of Estherâs hidden identity and her pivotal role in Godâs plan (Esther 2:10; 7:3-4). And the Bonds Accord itself feels like a symbol of human alliances built on sin, similar to the Tower of Babel (Genesis 11:4)âsomething that must be disrupted to uphold righteousness.
I especially loved how the Baronâs preference for blue connects to biblical symbolism of divine authority and truth (Numbers 15:38-39), which the Higardians despise. Itâs a bold reminder of the worldâs resistance to what is good and godly. His missionâs outcome reflects the same triumph we see when Christ cleansed the temple to restore righteousness (Matthew 21:12-13).
Looking ahead, Iâm curious to learn more about Scarfâs backstory. Her role could beautifully illustrate how God uses flawed individuals in His plan, much like Rahab in Joshua 2:1-21 and Matthew 1:5. Iâm also eager to see how the Baronâs character develops in the face of challenges, perhaps reflecting the perseverance Paul writes about in James 1:2-4 and demonstrates in Acts 16:25-26.
Thank you for writing such a rich and thought-provoking story. Itâs not just an entertaining adventure but also an opportunity to reflect on deeper spiritual truths. Your storytelling invites readers to explore themes of sacrifice, justice, and mission in a way that truly resonates. Well done!
Great depth to this story, Jordan! Blue Baron and Scarf are sure to get married and carry out more missions! đ
Exciting!