By Hannah Carter
βIf we said wedding vows, do you think weβd say ββtil death do us part,β or ββtil death bring us togetherβ?β I raised my gray, ghostly hand to view it in the moonlight.
βI donβt know, Eliza, but dβya think you can ask this question again after we stop two raging yΕkai from destroying this Tanabata celebration?β Reynolds, my living boyfriend, wiped his arm along his sweaty forehead and ducked as colorful decorations ripped off booths. The Japanese poltergeistβs shriek pierced the air while hundreds of people dressed in their traditional silk garments fled the nighttime July festivities. Theyβd gathered to celebrate the legendary star-crossed lovers, Hikoboshi and Orihimeβbut hadnβt expected the couple to crash the event.
Literally.
A cyclone whipped around us with the force of the yΕkaiβs screams, ripping bamboo leaves filled with tanzakuβwishesβfrom their shoots. The projectiles blew through my ethereal body. I shuddered, though they only tickled my particles.
Reynolds staggered toward the windstormβs eye. The once-dry ground squelched underneath his heavy tread. βOh, that canβt be good,β he muttered.
A few steps ahead, the ground split. Water bubbled out of the crack, trickling down the sloped street and growing exponentially.
βLook out!β I bellowed. I reached to shove Reynolds, but my arms passed through him.
He staggered onto a bench right before a roaring river slammed into me.
And, for only the second time in almost a century, I felt pain.
The water swept me under, the rapids ramming me against the ground. I couldnβt fight its power. Unlike real water, this ghostly deluge burned. It ripped at my dress and body, shredding my existence. I hadnβt experienced pain like this since the night Iβd first escaped my time loop.
It felt like death.
Again.
Until someone plucked me from the torrent.
I gaspedβthough I technically needed no airβas the stranger deposited me on solid ground. Water dripped off me. My cloche hat was gone. I could summon a new oneβbut could I remake the bits of me Iβd lost?
βYour particles will return in a moment,β my rescuer said. He spoke with a deep, soft voice.
βH-How do you know?β My teeth chattered, and I wrapped my arms around myself. Iβd forgotten how awful cold was.
The man tucked his hands into the long sleeves of his hakama. βI have experienced the river’s wrath many times, trying to cross it to see my love again.β
My voice came out louder than I intended. βYouβre the other yΕkaiβHikoboshi!β
Hikoboshi stepped forward. The ground cracked beneath him, and the split ran straight into a booth, which collapsed. βI am no yΕkai! All I wish is to be reunited with my love, but this river stands between us!β More bamboo shoots shook, their wishes rattling. βFor millennia I have tried to cross it, but her fatherβs curse is too powerful.β The wind buffeted his black hair, whipping strands around his sorrowful face.
βYouβre destroying this Tanabata celebration, though!β My voice rose as the wind crescendoed with Orihimeβs shrieks.
βWould you not destroy the world if it meant you could be with your love forever?β Hikoboshi growled.
I glanced behind me. On the other side of the river, Reynolds stood on the bench. The Hikoboshi to my Orihime.
My gaze dropped to my ghostly hand. Iβd regained all my particles, but that didnβt matter. Reynolds might have been my boyfriend, but we couldnβt even hold hands.
βI would,β I whispered.
βThen help me,β Hikoboshi begged. βPlease.β
I sighed. Cupped my hands around my mouth. βReynolds! Over here!β
His head popped up. βLiza!β
He reached inside his pocket and pulled out one of his exorcism cigarettes, lighting it. The end glowed red, and he blew a puff of smoke into the air. Ashes trailed down into the river. Wherever they fell, the water hissed and evaporated. Despite the flood around him, Reynolds crossed on dry land, though his path disappeared once heβd made it to my side.
Reynolds took the cigarette out of his mouth. βLiza, back up. Stay away from the ash.β His eyes were locked on Hikoboshi. The ground cracked underneath the yΕkai again, and Reynolds lurched.
I stepped between them.
The wind whipped Reynoldsβs ash around. Some of it fell on my skin, and I cried out, burned for the second time of the evening.
βLiza!β Reynolds reached toward me. βBack away!β
βNo!β Tears burned in my eyes. βReynolds, please. We have to help them reunite, just like the legends say. Theyβve never actually been able to be together, on July 7th or any other day.β
He snuffed out the cigarette, though he drew an unlit one from his coat pocket. βTheyβre yΕkai, Liza. Poltergeists.β
βTheyβre us.β I pointed at myself. βYou werenβt supposed to help me, either. But you did. If it wasnβt for you, Iβd be stuck reliving the Kentucky Derby for eternity.β Fat droplets trickled down my cheeks. βAnd now death separates me from the man I love. Thatβs a different kind of death, Reynolds, but no less painful.β
We stared at each other, no Tanabata torrents between us, but a river all the same.
Reynolds sighed. βPoltergeists destroy things if left unattended. We give them what they want, they could go on another rampage. Sink Japan into the ocean.β
βOr they could finally find happiness after millennia of misery.β I wiped my damp face. βAnd give me hope that one day, we might find the same.β
Reynolds sighed. Glanced at his cigarette. Walked to the river and lit it. βHikoboshi, follow me. And stay away from the ash.β
Hikoboshi turned to me, his brow furrowed.
βGo,β I whispered. βHeβs taking you to Orihime.β
From my spot on the riverbank, I watched the two men cross. Minutes later, the torrent died down to a trickle before disappearing completely.
A smile crept onto my face as Reynolds shuffled back into view, his hands stuffed in his pockets, carrying my hope thatβsomehowβweβd ford our river, too.





Great story as always, Hannah!!π Love seeing this duo in action!! A good reminder that things arenβt always as they appear, and that sometimes we need to take time to see what others are going through! π
Thank you so much, Andrew!! Sometimes even the dead need that reminderβ¦ π»π
I can’t wait for the next one! I love this story!
Thank you so much, Jen!! If all goes well, hopefully there will be lots more Eliza & Reynolds in the future! π»π
This was beautiful! I loved all the Japanese words and images, too. Great story!
Thank you so much, Arlan!! I had a lot of fun re-visiting Japan with these characters. Hopefully one day Iβll get to go for real! π»π
Thrilling!
Thank you so much, Morgan!! π»π
we want more of these characters!
Awww, yay!! Thank you so much, Laurie!! I’m glad that you all like them. I hope I can tell lots more stories about Eliza & Reynolds! π»π
I love all the stories about this couple. Nicely done!
Awww, thank you so much, Vanessa!! I’m so glad that you all keep coming back to read more about them. I love them, too! π»π
Yay! Reynolds and Liza are back! Ahhh hope <3 Great story, Hannah. Thank you for sharing :)
I love how excited you are for them, Tracy!! Thank you so much for your encouragement. It makes me feel so happy to know that people want more Eliza & Reynolds! π»π
Hannah, being separated from your true love is a great premise for a story. Well done! And I love the exorcism cigarette bit.βΊοΈ
Love Reynolds and Eliza! π€©
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Very interesting world building! I hope they can be together! :)