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Tanabata Torrents

By Hannah Carter

โ€œIf we said wedding vows, do you think weโ€™d say โ€˜โ€˜til death do us part,โ€™ or โ€˜โ€˜til death bring us togetherโ€™?โ€ I raised my gray, ghostly hand to view it in the moonlight.

โ€œI donโ€™t know, Eliza, but dโ€™ya think you can ask this question again after we stop two raging yลkai from destroying this Tanabata celebration?โ€ Reynolds, my living boyfriend, wiped his arm along his sweaty forehead and ducked as colorful decorations ripped off booths. The Japanese poltergeistโ€™s shriek pierced the air while hundreds of people dressed in their traditional silk garments fled the nighttime July festivities. Theyโ€™d gathered to celebrate the legendary star-crossed lovers, Hikoboshi and Orihimeโ€”but hadnโ€™t expected the couple to crash the event.

Literally.

A cyclone whipped around us with the force of the yลkaiโ€™s screams, ripping bamboo leaves filled with tanzakuโ€”wishesโ€”from their shoots. The projectiles blew through my ethereal body. I shuddered, though they only tickled my particles.

Reynolds staggered toward the windstormโ€™s eye. The once-dry ground squelched underneath his heavy tread. โ€œOh, that canโ€™t be good,โ€ he muttered.

A few steps ahead, the ground split. Water bubbled out of the crack, trickling down the sloped street and growing exponentially.

โ€œLook out!โ€ I bellowed. I reached to shove Reynolds, but my arms passed through him.

He staggered onto a bench right before a roaring river slammed into me.

And, for only the second time in almost a century, I felt pain.

The water swept me under, the rapids ramming me against the ground. I couldnโ€™t fight its power. Unlike real water, this ghostly deluge burned. It ripped at my dress and body, shredding my existence. I hadnโ€™t experienced pain like this since the night Iโ€™d first escaped my time loop.

It felt like death.

Again.

Until someone plucked me from the torrent.

I gaspedโ€”though I technically needed no airโ€”as the stranger deposited me on solid ground. Water dripped off me. My cloche hat was gone. I could summon a new oneโ€”but could I remake the bits of me Iโ€™d lost?

โ€œYour particles will return in a moment,โ€ my rescuer said. He spoke with a deep, soft voice.

โ€œH-How do you know?โ€ My teeth chattered, and I wrapped my arms around myself. Iโ€™d forgotten how awful cold was.

The man tucked his hands into the long sleeves of his hakama. โ€œI have experienced the river’s wrath many times, trying to cross it to see my love again.โ€

My voice came out louder than I intended. โ€œYouโ€™re the other yลkaiโ€”Hikoboshi!โ€

Hikoboshi stepped forward. The ground cracked beneath him, and the split ran straight into a booth, which collapsed. โ€œI am no yลkai! All I wish is to be reunited with my love, but this river stands between us!โ€ More bamboo shoots shook, their wishes rattling. โ€œFor millennia I have tried to cross it, but her fatherโ€™s curse is too powerful.โ€ The wind buffeted his black hair, whipping strands around his sorrowful face.

โ€œYouโ€™re destroying this Tanabata celebration, though!โ€ My voice rose as the wind crescendoed with Orihimeโ€™s shrieks.

โ€œWould you not destroy the world if it meant you could be with your love forever?โ€ Hikoboshi growled.

I glanced behind me. On the other side of the river, Reynolds stood on the bench. The Hikoboshi to my Orihime.

My gaze dropped to my ghostly hand. Iโ€™d regained all my particles, but that didnโ€™t matter. Reynolds might have been my boyfriend, but we couldnโ€™t even hold hands.

โ€œI would,โ€ I whispered.

โ€œThen help me,โ€ Hikoboshi begged. โ€œPlease.โ€

I sighed. Cupped my hands around my mouth. โ€œReynolds! Over here!โ€

His head popped up. โ€œLiza!โ€

He reached inside his pocket and pulled out one of his exorcism cigarettes, lighting it. The end glowed red, and he blew a puff of smoke into the air. Ashes trailed down into the river. Wherever they fell, the water hissed and evaporated. Despite the flood around him, Reynolds crossed on dry land, though his path disappeared once heโ€™d made it to my side.

Reynolds took the cigarette out of his mouth. โ€œLiza, back up. Stay away from the ash.โ€ His eyes were locked on Hikoboshi. The ground cracked underneath the yลkai again, and Reynolds lurched.

I stepped between them.

The wind whipped Reynoldsโ€™s ash around. Some of it fell on my skin, and I cried out, burned for the second time of the evening.

โ€œLiza!โ€ Reynolds reached toward me. โ€œBack away!โ€

โ€œNo!โ€ Tears burned in my eyes. โ€œReynolds, please. We have to help them reunite, just like the legends say. Theyโ€™ve never actually been able to be together, on July 7th or any other day.โ€

He snuffed out the cigarette, though he drew an unlit one from his coat pocket. โ€œTheyโ€™re yลkai, Liza. Poltergeists.โ€

โ€œTheyโ€™re us.โ€ I pointed at myself. โ€œYou werenโ€™t supposed to help me, either. But you did. If it wasnโ€™t for you, Iโ€™d be stuck reliving the Kentucky Derby for eternity.โ€ Fat droplets trickled down my cheeks. โ€œAnd now death separates me from the man I love. Thatโ€™s a different kind of death, Reynolds, but no less painful.โ€

We stared at each other, no Tanabata torrents between us, but a river all the same.

Reynolds sighed. โ€œPoltergeists destroy things if left unattended. We give them what they want, they could go on another rampage. Sink Japan into the ocean.โ€

โ€œOr they could finally find happiness after millennia of misery.โ€ I wiped my damp face. โ€œAnd give me hope that one day, we might find the same.โ€

Reynolds sighed. Glanced at his cigarette. Walked to the river and lit it. โ€œHikoboshi, follow me. And stay away from the ash.โ€

Hikoboshi turned to me, his brow furrowed.

โ€œGo,โ€ I whispered. โ€œHeโ€™s taking you to Orihime.โ€

From my spot on the riverbank, I watched the two men cross. Minutes later, the torrent died down to a trickle before disappearing completely.

A smile crept onto my face as Reynolds shuffled back into view, his hands stuffed in his pockets, carrying my hope thatโ€”somehowโ€”weโ€™d ford our river, too.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Hannah Carter is just a girl who wakes up every day hoping it will be the day she discovers sheโ€™s secretly a mermaid. Her debut novel, Depths of Atlantis, is out through SnowRidge Press now. Her stories have been included in several anthologies: Whispers From Before, The Never Tales, and Havokโ€™s Casting Call and Prismatic. Her flash fiction piece “A Home for Nova” won the 2022 Flash Fiction Realm Award.


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  • Great story as always, Hannah!!๐Ÿ˜Š Love seeing this duo in action!! A good reminder that things arenโ€™t always as they appear, and that sometimes we need to take time to see what others are going through! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Thank you so much, Andrew!! Sometimes even the dead need that reminderโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

    • Thank you so much, Jen!! If all goes well, hopefully there will be lots more Eliza & Reynolds in the future! ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

    • Thank you so much, Arlan!! I had a lot of fun re-visiting Japan with these characters. Hopefully one day Iโ€™ll get to go for real! ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

    • Awww, yay!! Thank you so much, Laurie!! I’m glad that you all like them. I hope I can tell lots more stories about Eliza & Reynolds! ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

    • Awww, thank you so much, Vanessa!! I’m so glad that you all keep coming back to read more about them. I love them, too! ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

  • Yay! Reynolds and Liza are back! Ahhh hope <3 Great story, Hannah. Thank you for sharing :)

    • I love how excited you are for them, Tracy!! Thank you so much for your encouragement. It makes me feel so happy to know that people want more Eliza & Reynolds! ๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ”Ž

  • Hannah, being separated from your true love is a great premise for a story. Well done! And I love the exorcism cigarette bit.โ˜บ๏ธ

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