By Katie Rew
I first consider a 1600s castle but prefer something more thrilling.
I leave the grand castle painting and wander through the antique store, one of the few places where I can truly be myself—free and unwatched.
What would it be like if I did this with a friend? I wonder. But no one wants to be friends with the weird girl.
The old lady at the desk gives me a nod of recognition, and we exchange a smile. Part of me thinks she’s onto what I do here. Who knows? Maybe she’s done it herself.
I cover the entire store, but there’s nothing I haven’t explored hundreds of times before.
Then I see it, peeking out from behind dozens of other pictures leaning against a wall. I pull out a wood-framed painting nearly as tall as me and stare into the mischievous eyes of a boy who looks vaguely familiar. He wears a smudged white button-up complete with suspenders. He’s reaching for the revolver hanging from his belt. An oil lamp partially illuminates his face, revealing an eager twist to his mouth.
I smile.
The Wild West will definitely be more thrilling than that old castle.
With a quick glance around to ensure no one is watching, I press my hand against its surface. Then I’m there; the stifling smell of smoke clogs my nose. I appear slightly behind the boy. He grips the door frame as he peeks into a room of burly men gathered at the table.
Yes, this was a perfect picture to jump into. I snap a shot with my camera. Another one for my scrapbook.
The boy spins, staring right at where I’m standing as if he could actually see me.
His brow furrows, and I snap another shot.
He latches onto my arm and drags me away from the doorway. I nearly fall backward. This isn’t possible. No one can see me in a picture, let alone touch me.
A few feet from the door he stops and turns, the light of an oil lamp fully illuminating his face.
“Here to take me home?”
“How—”
“You don’t know? I’m like you. You’re Rachel or something, right? You go to my school.”
“Rain,” I stammer out. Then I remember. His face plastered all over the internet, newspapers, and billboards. “Brandon. Brandon Renner.”
He’s been missing for a few weeks, maybe a month, feared dead. And yet he’s been here in this picture the whole time?
He must see the question in my eyes, because he says, “I can’t remember where I entered. Not sure why, but I can’t. And if you can’t remember—”
“You can’t return.”
I shudder. It almost happened to me once. It had been a long day and my hand fell on a picture while I rested my eyes. I found myself inside an unknown world with no recollection of where I had come in. I remembered eventually, but it scared the life out of me. After that, I didn’t jump for weeks.
“Brandon! Where are you?” Someone bellows from another room.
“Who’s that?” I ask.
Brandon shrugs. “Just the cook wanting me to scrub those dishes.”
“He can see you?”
“If you’re here long enough.” He runs a hand through his brown hair and motions to his clothes. “Can eat their food and wear their clothes too. I just hope that I won’t be invisible once we jump back.” He grins. “One plus is I have gotten pretty quick with this.” He pats the revolver at his hip.
Yeah, because being a gunslinger is exactly what you need to succeed in the twenty-first century.
I study him for a moment. I’ve always thought that jumping was mine. An ability that no one else shares. I feel exposed, my one secret known.
“Hey, boy!” a voice calls. “Need more whiskey.”
Brandon gives me a wink and hurries to the card table. He returns a moment later and nods to the door. “Don’t want to cross him. That’s John Wesley Hardin. They say he’s murdered over twenty men.”
I step toward the doorway and scan the table. A dark-haired man sits with his back to me. I’m thankful that, unlike Brandon, I’m invisible to him.
Something barrels past me, and the boom that follows nearly sends me jumping back to the antique shop.
John Wesley Hardin slumps on the table, dead.
His shooter turns, and his gaze locks on me.
No. Not me. On Brandon.
There’s a flicker of recognition in the shooter’s brown eyes.
Then I remember what picture I’m in, and there’s no way I’m going to wait to see who’s the quickest draw. I grip Brandon’s arm and envision the antique store.
Then we’re there, Brandon’s hand resting next to mine on the picture.
He blinks and looks around. A smile forms as if he recognizes the place. Then he focuses on me, and his expression darkens. “I could have beat him to the draw.”
That’s his first thought? Not gratitude for me saving his life? Of all the—
His face goes white. “You can see me, right?”
“I see an idiot,” I mumble.
“What?”
“Nothing. I’m just glad you’re not dead or anything.”
“Oh, well, thanks.” He grins.
Then I notice he’s still wearing the western clothes, and the revolver’s still at his side.
I smirk. “Those are probably collectible now.”
“So, I’m rich?”
“Only if you share.”
He gives a mock bow. “What’s mine is yours, and I’m forever in your debt.” He flashes another grin. “We’ll have to do this again sometime.”
Again? He barely made it home and he wants to go again?
And he wants to go with me?
For a split second, I feel as if I’ve lost something—a place of solitude where only I can go with my camera and thoughts. Then again, maybe what I’ve gained is better than what I’ve lost.
I match his smile. “Yes, we will.”





I love this! It is a fun adventure on its own, with some great world building in a short time, but then it also sets up many future possibilities.
Interesting that she can take pictures inside the pictures, and bring them back. One thing I would have liked in this story, is if I could have seen her holding the camera before she went through. Because it kind of appeared out of nowhere, and I wasn’t sure whether it was an actual camera or a cell phone camera – I pictured an actual camera, but I’d expect it to be a big one, high quality, which would make it more obvious and so I’d expect to see it right away when you describe the character. But anyway… I’m rambling about that because I like the story so much, and I’m seeing it in my head and going through all the details. Which means it’s a great story.
I wonder whether they could jump into paintings of imaginary places. I wonder what would happen if they tried to jump into an abstract painting (I probably wouldn’t try that one, but I would wonder.)
This was a great story, Katie! Super fun! I loved the ending! :)
Lovely work on this, Katie! Love the worldbuilding and the subtle humor—the banter definitely made me chuckle 😆Proud of you!
Ahhh I love westerns. I like that Rachel has a friend now with this shared unique ability. The adventures that are possible! What a great story!
I love the banter between these two! I agree with Kevin that this was a lot of fun and the future possibilities are endless!
Great story! Loved the painting-jumping concept… I’d love to see a superhero with that power!
Such a fun concept! Great job, Katie!