By Beka Gremikova
Ivan never expected his future to rely on a honeybee.
Just one more challenge. He clenched his fists as he stood before the golden door on the Ukran palace’s upper floor. If he succeeded, he’d free the imprisoned Tsarina Mischa as well as her subjects, who had all been cursed a week ago and mysteriously disappeared.
Unless my brothers already freed them. After all, they were Rusak’s strongest warriors, and what was Ivan but Little Pale Face, Prince Goldilocks? Prince Ivan the Vapid. Prince Ivan the Weak. Prince Ivan the Damsel. Tall and thin, the nicest thing anyone ever said about him was that he was kind. But every Rusakian man knew that heroes were supposed to be strong, not kind.
A soft buzz echoed from his shoulder. He lifted his hand, and his tiny ally, the queen bee of Ukran’s royal hive, landed on his finger. After he rescued her hive from his brothers’ attempts to destroy it for its honey, she’d tagged along on his mission. Just a small speck of yellow, yet her soft, humming presence soothed him.
Placing her gently on his shoulder, he pushed the door open.
His eyes drank in a dressing room glinting with vanities, wash basins, and golden vials of perfumes. Heaps of coins littered the floor. Statues lined this side of the chamber. Opposite them, three unmoving figures sat on thrones, wrapped in veils with golden circlets resting on their foreheads. To break the curse, Ivan needed to determine which of the three was the real Tsarina Mischa, the famous Honey Princess of Ukra.
He frowned. His brothers hadn’t yet arrived—which meant he actually had a chance. His fingers tingled with anticipation.
His gaze roved back over the room, landing on the statues.
He nearly choked. The statues were his brothers, arms outstretched toward the door, their fingers veined in gold. Behind them flocked the stone corpses of fellow failed adventurers.
Failure to guess correctly meant death, then.
And despite wrestling dragons and fraternizing with warlords and emperors, his brothers had failed.
Ivan covered his face with his hands. How could he succeed when his brothers hadn’t?
Breathe, man. Breathe. Ivan sucked in deep breaths, forcing himself to look away from the statues. He focused on the dragon’s hoard of coins scattered around his feet.
Part of him wanted to scoop up enough to buy his own kingdom and flee. Why put his life at risk for complete strangers? It hadn’t done his brothers any good.
But if he walked away now, what sort of man would he be? Rich, safe… but weak—weak in character. And somehow, that bothered Ivan more than his inability to hack a monster into pieces.
He cursed, then clenched his teeth so tightly his jaw popped. Wincing, he shut his eyes and concentrated on the soft hum of the queen bee under his ear. That small yellow speck, soft and fuzzy to the touch. Her hum drove away his frantic thoughts and helped him concentrate.
You must do this. Tsarina Mischa doesn’t deserve to stay cursed.
Ivan bent to inspect the women, searching for some distinguishing feature. They all shared golden hair and pale, slim fingers that clutched the arms of their chairs. Their dresses were identical shades of white and crafted of the same smooth fabric. None of them so much as twitched.
He bit back a groan of frustration. He didn’t have to be a warrior to succeed here. He just needed to think. Maybe his knowledge would spark an idea. What did he know about the Honey Princess?
Tsarina Mischa. He’d heard tales of her kindness, her generosity, her honey-sweet spirit. How she tended to the Ukran beehives. How she constantly munched on sweets, or spooned honey straight from the jar—
Honey from the jar.
His eyes snapped open.
The curse had fallen very recently, so honey residue might still be on her face…
“Queen Bee,” he whispered.
His small ally buzzed.
“Which of these ladies has honey on her face?”
The flickering yellow dot dashed from one chair to the next, sliding under each veil before popping back out. She circled the figure on the left, buzzing loudly.
Holding his breath, Ivan reached out, tapping his choice for the tsarina gently on the forehead.
There was a loud snap. He jumped back as the coins littering the floor grew taller, stretching into a huddled bunch of sleepy-eyed servants. They took one look at each other and burst into a flurry.
Ivan flinched, waiting for his brothers to revive and take over, pushing him into the background.
But the statues didn’t stir. The servants shoved them out the door as two of the cursed women shifted, rubbing their eyes and blinking at one another. Tsarina Mischa snatched the veil from her face, revealing soft blue eyes, and turned to her look-alike companions. “Cousin Anya? Ketraka? Are you both all right?”
“A bit stiff,” Anya murmured, shaking out her limbs.
Ketraka sniffed, dusting her chair with her veil. “That sorcerer had some nerve, cursing us because you refused to marry him!”
Mischa eyed Ivan as the queen bee alighted on her head, burrowing into her hair. “You’re not here to force me into marriage, are you?”
Ivan sat back on his heels. “Oh, no! That’s a horrendous practice.”
“Good,” Ketraka said, dipping her head to him. “Then we thank you for your aid, sir…?”
Ivan stared down at his scuffed travel boots, bracing himself for Mischa’s disappointment as he murmured, “Prince Ivan of Rusak.”
Mischa straightened, her color heightening. Her cousins gasped, then glanced at each other with knowing smiles.
Mischa reached out a hand as if to touch him. “Oh!” she breathed. “I—I’ve heard of you.” Her fingers fluttered to her hair, smoothing it. “I never thought I’d actually get to meet you. I was so afraid another type of prince might come.” Her soft blue eyes shone. “I’m so glad it was you, Prince Ivan the Benevolent.”


(15 votes, average: 2.53 out of 3)


I knew right from when the prince had a bee as his non-human companion I was going to like this story. It had a clever puzzle and solution. Really enjoyed it.
Thank you very much! I can’t take any credit for the genius of the solution. XD That element was in the original fairytale, “The Queen Bee,” that this story retells–I just added my own little spin on the setting and some details. (The cursed coins, for example, are my own addition, and I dug deeper into the prince’s emotions and psyche than the OG tale). I’m so glad you enjoyed the story! :-D
AAH I love your retellling! I loved this story very much when I was small!
EEE, thank you, Rose! I’m so happy to find someone else familiar with this tale! I loved this story, too. I had an illustrated book of fairytales with this one included, and I loved its picture of a curly-haired princess surrounded by bees. <3
I thought the princess was going to end up being the bee.
Ivan want that upset to lose his brothers, was he?😉
Lovely story, Beka! I find for these color based ones, I like it when the important object is yellow and a surprise, like the little queen bee. Long live the bees!
Ohh, now THAT’s a twist. I may have to use that in future… I love me a shapeshifting fairytale. ;-)
Let’s just say, I don’t think there’s any love lost between him and his brothers… I’m sure he’ll mourn them, as is his duty, but… well, royal family lives are #complicated
Thank you, Lisa! When I thought about a fantasy story for the Yellow theme, a retelling of the fairytale “The Queen Bee” just begged to be written.
Hi Beka! Nice job with the story! I liked the honey imagery and your use of a non-traditional familiar! I also liked your succinct romance, with a hint of a future relationship between Ivan and Mischa.
Thank you, Andrew! This is a retelling of the fairytale, “The Queen Bee”—I think you’d enjoy the original. :-) Thank you for reading!
Ivan the Benevolent – Bee Whisperer. You’ve created good images, enjoyable story.
Thank you very much!
I got a strong sense of your main characters in this story even in such a short space of time. Nice work! Now I need to go and read the fairy tale. I didn’t know it existed!
Thank you, Krysta! I love the original fairytale. I’d love to hear your thoughts once you’ve read it!
“Prince Ivan the Benevolent” *snifflesssssssssssss*
I’m so proud of our good, gentle prince <3
Our sweet cinnamon roll <3
Ahh, this was so sweet, as appropriate for a story about honey! I really like the emphasis of the importance of kindness being the central character trait of a hero.
Everything about this story was great!
Thank you, dear friend!!! <3 <3
Awww this is such a sweet story!! I love the bee aspect and how she values his benevolence 🐝💛
Thank you, friend!!! <3 Sweet, benevolent characters are important to me. <3
I ADORE this story so so much!! What a magical, fairy tale adventure! So fresh and unique and sweet. 😍
*flails* THANK YOU SO MUCH, JANE! Your enthusiasm and support for my stories is such a blessing to me. <3
I like the bees and the name she give Ivan at the end. So sweet.
Thank you so much! 😊
Really sweet story! I’m always thrilled with your stories and smile in anticipation when I see your name in the byline.
Oh wow, thank you so very much, Arlan! That makes me very happy!
I love how the Tsarina gave him a better title than what his own country men and family had given him. It is like Jesus. He gives a greater title than what the world gives us.
Thank you! 😀
Aww, that was sweet as honey (I’m sure someone already took that lol)! Loved the ending especially. <3
Thank you, friend! <3 And I always appreciate a sweet pun ;-)
I love a lot of things about this story, including the creative use of yellow and the value of kindness.
Also, you may want to look up Stephen Colbert playing Dungeons and Dragons with Matt Mercer. His bee companion was immediately what I was reminded of.
Thank you so much!!! ❤️
Ohhh I’ll definitely look that up!