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Mischievous Fire

By Josiah Dyck

It was the fire that called Elvira out that night.

She gazed at the burning watchtower through her binoculars, and as she recognized the arsonist’s handiwork, a familiar sensation rose within her—she was closing in on her target. The sensation swelled, and she spurred her horse down the hillside into the desert valley.

The telegram she’d received earlier that week played in her head: “To the honorable Miss Bailey, from the Sheriff Council of the Rollythian region. We request your services in our hunt for an unknown arsonist. The governor is pressuring us to stop him by any means. Your feats precede you, which is why, should you accept, we will agree on a location to offer a partial payment and all known information on the outlaw.

“We look forward to working with you.”

The money was secondary to her. What interested her most was that the council would hire a bounty hunter whose methods were less-than-legal. How could one criminal strike fear so profoundly? I suppose I’m about to find out.

The wind picked up, tearing at her frock coat and Stetson hat. The flames of the burning watchtower danced nearly sideways in the wind. She lifted her bandana to ward against the sand. Something about the storm didn’t feel right. It seemed to be warding her off.

She responded by increasing her horse’s speed, and she soon arrived at the outskirts of the town. A railroad cut through its heart, but nothing stood out to her. Save for the sizzling fire, it was quiet.

Deathly quiet.

Elvira dismounted and crept deeper into the ghost town. This didn’t add up—razing settlements seemed more appropriate for a gang, but the reports had mentioned only one man.

Her foot crunched on something. She glanced down. The charred corpse of some poor denizen stared back at her with blackened eyes and crispy lips stretched in a morbid scream. Forcing her stomach to stay in check, Elvira assessed the environment more closely. With the tower’s flames providing the only light, she hadn’t noticed them before, but now she spotted several more burnt bodies. What was going on here?

Smoke drifted her way. The entire watchtower was engulfed in hellfire. If she didn’t know better, a half-breed dragon was decimating the town. Could it be? She cocked her revolver and unsheathed her gladius.

Quickening her pace, Elvira strode closer to the flames’ origin, still keeping to the shadows.

She rounded a corner and stifled a gasp. A man stood with his back to her, entranced by the titan inferno. His black attire looked just like any other outlaw’s.

She stepped forward and fired once at his head, twice at his heart, not ceasing her march.

The man spun around, and a heated flash burst from him, incinerating the bullets midair. “What a terrible greeting. You don’t even know me, and yet you’d gun me down?”

For the first time in months, true fear clenched Elvira’s neck, but she kept marching. “The sheriffs want you dealt with.”

“Lady, you’re insane. Unless that’s a god-kissed blade you’ve got there?”

Not waiting for an answer, he let out another heatwave, one that sent her flying back onto the train tracks. Her gladius melted in a pool of steel, and the man shrugged. “That’s a no, then.” His flesh burned off, leaving behind a fiery humanoid shape.

The fear choked Elvira. This arsonist was no man, nor half-breed dragon; he was a pyrogeist. Never had she thought she’d encounter one. I’m not prepared for this.

“Why don’t you stay and enjoy my creation?” the spirit boomed in a crackling voice. “Not everyone witnesses a night of mischievous fire from Arturus.”

Run.

She jumped up and bolted, Arturus’s hollow laughter following her.

When he whooshed past and blocked her path, she shot him point-blank. He sighed. “Stop this nasty habit at once.” He lobbed a fireball that liquefied the gun, searing Elvira’s hand. She shrieked.

“Is the lady hurt? She shouldn’t spoil my fun.” Arturus chuckled.

Elvira whistled for her horse. It galloped toward her from the end of the street, trembling in fright. The pyrogeist turned. Elvira scooped up a handful of sand and flung it on him. The flames flickered rather than going out, but it elicited a scream from Arturus as he fell to his knees. Elvira swung onto her horse and careened out of the town.

After riding hard past the outermost buildings, she slowed and sighed in relief, cradling her injured hand. That she was still alive was a miracle owed to the spirit’s playful nature getting the best of him. But now she had to get to safety, warn the council, and—

The ground shook behind her. Elvira threw a glance over her shoulder and saw a train chugging through town. Was the conductor mad? Did he not see the burning buildings?

Arturus dove out of an alley and into the train. The mechanical beast ignited with supernatural flames, and the pyrogeist’s demonic face appeared on the front of the engine. “You’d better start praying, lady!” he shrieked. The train sped up.

Elvira spurred her horse harder, the panic stealing her very breath. The train burnt through the tracks and hopped onto the desert sand, turning it into molten glass. The storm picked up, morphing into a whirlwind of grit and chaos that laughed at her desperation.

That was it! The sandstorm had to be the key. She charged into the thick of it and took Arturus’s advice, praying that the idea would work. The spirit roared with laughter as the engine bore down on her.

The flying sand turned to glass, shredding the pyrogeist’s currently-physical eyes. He howled and ceased possession of the train. It immediately dug into the desert and began to roll while he cursed and rocketed away.

Elvira pressed her lips together and urged her horse onward. She had to tell the sheriffs of her discovery.

Otherwise, Arturus’s fire would eat a lot more than one watchtower.


Can you guess which song from the 1990's inspired this story? Share in the comments!

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Josiah Dyck is a lover and writer of all things speculative fiction, particularly YA fantasy. His current project is a trilogy of trilogies, which collectively form Chapters of Kythe. When not writing, he’s immersing himself in video game worlds, listening to soundtracks, hanging out with friends and family, collecting LEGO, watching YouTube, and going for walks. He strives to share the love and hope of Jesus through all he does.


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  • Whoa! That was super intense and awesome! Such a well-written, exciting story! I loved it–and now I need to know what happens next. XD Love the fantasy western flavor, and Elvira’s name!

    • Thank you! It’s always good to know when a story of mine is thrilling and keeps readers hooked. Haha, even I don’t know what happens next! I imagine Arturus will continue to bring the heat, unless someone can stop him. XD Thanks! It’s a bit of an interesting mix, but I’m glad it turned out okay. I also love Elvira’s name, if I do say so myself.

  • I’d like to hear more from this story! The western fantasy setting is intruiging… and the terrifying fiery train is excellent!
    I think I might have a guess as to which song inspired this story…

    • Thanks! That’s a very high compliment, especially when we’re talking about a story that’s only 1,000 words long. I’m glad you liked the setting, and I couldn’t NOT include a train chase–they’re staples of the western genre, and having one on fire would make things that much more intense!

      Feel free to take a stab at it! It never hurts to make a guess, whether it’s right or wrong.

  • Josiah, you have written a great story! I just wish it was longer! It was so well written and intense!
    Keep the stories coming!
    I am so proud of you!

    • Thank you, Mom! Perhaps one day I’ll expand it, but that probably wouldn’t be for quite some time. Good to know that it was indeed intense.

      I sure will, and thanks!

    • Thank you so much! It makes me really happy to hear that people loved the story. And this was such a last-minute project, too, and I’ve personally judged it a lot harder. So reading these kinds of comments is super encouraging! ^_^

  • Josiah, you’re writing skills aren’t just showing up loud and clear. They are SCREAMING to be released !! Don’t keep them in a bottle. Shake it up and release the pressure so that we may all partake of your talent.
    Wonderful story.

    • Thank you so much, Dad! I think this comment made my day. ^_^ I’ll do my best to do just that.

      Thanks again!

  • OOO, this is so, so, so cool! When I read how the sand hurt Arturus the first time I was like, “Woah, now THAT’S clever!!! I love this!” :O Seriously! This is awesome!

    I just needa say you’re really talented. O.O I felt so attached to the main character even if you had such few words to work with. I wish I could learn about the whole story and characters and ahh, just the whole world here. XD Good job, Josiah!

    If I could rate this, I’d do the highest rating. <3

    • Thank you! But I thought it was more on the warmer side of things, so why is it cool? ;P Thanks a bunch! That was actually very much a last-minute idea. I wasn’t sure how Elvira was going to temporarily stop Arturus in so few words. Then I remembered the sandstorm, and the glass shard idea came to mind. So I’m very happy that you thought it was clever.

      Aww, thank you! It always makes me really happy to know that people connect with my characters in some way. I might expand the story one day, but that day is definitely far off.

      Thanks again!

  • Duuuuuude, I heckin’ loved this! You’re an expert at imagery and descriptions that almost seem to pop into existence. You are a writer wizard, Josiah!

    I especially loved the sand turning into glass part! It sounds so deadly but gorgeous. I got a lot of LoZ: Spirit Tracks vibes from that train part.

    Nicely done, bro! <3

    • Thank you so much! That’s a very high compliment, because an author’s style is extremely important to the story. “You’re a wizard, Joey!” XD

      It seems that people really enjoyed that part! Well, you and Chloe, at least. :P Interesting! I hadn’t thought of anything remotely Zelda-related when I wrote the story, but it’s cool that there were some of those vibes.

      Thanks again, sis!

  • Ooooh, creepy! I think I need more fantasy western in my life now. This was wonderfully paced and clever to boot. Excellent job, as always! :)

    • Creepy is always good, in my books. It’s definitely a fun genre mashup to work with, I found! Thank you kindly, Tracey! :D

  • Woah, bro… I did not expect this much HEAT from your story! Chill, bro! Chill!

    That was just excellent. You have really good writing!!!

    Honestly, I was quite scared.

    • I know, the story was just on FIRE, wasn’t it, dude? “Chill” isn’t a word where I come from. XD

      Thanks a ton, man! I’m glad that I both thrilled and frightened you. (Has anyone ever told you that you leave the best comments on my stories? Because you do.)

    • Haha, you’re most welcome! He didn’t really want to go, but he also didn’t have much of a choice. ;P Thank you! Nope, not quite. (To be honest, I’d be a little surprised if anyone guesses the song correctly.)

    • Haha, thanks, Christine! I’ll probably expand this story one day, but I doubt that’ll be any time soon. Thank you again; I’m glad you enjoyed it so much! ^_^

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