By Carlos Candela Terry
I wake facedown on the cool titanium floor, my vision blurred and my mind shrouded in fog. My jaw cracks with stiffness. Iaclite’s fiery, blue light shines through the portside window and bathes dust particles in a teal hue; they hover like a swarm of lifeless fireflies. I struggle to my feet, my hands leaving behind condensation marks that glare in the blue dwarf’s light. I can barely breathe. Signs of a malfunction in the life-support system. Did we crash?
I limp over to an engineering console—the effort leaving me dizzy—and squint to get a clearer view of the fractured display. A gash adorns the side of our hull.
We’re leaking oxygen. I seal off the tanks and access the emergency air supply.
The console buzzes. “Signal Failure.”
I look around. There’s a trickle of blood on the wall, which leads to a crumpled body. The harsh white of its lab coat is sprayed a sickly red. Dom. I grit my teeth through the nausea gripping my bowels.
The impact of Dom’s corpse disconnected the optic fibers linking the console to the rest of the ship. It’s receiving information but can’t get a signal out. I kneel and plug it back in. When I rise to my feet, my vision darkens.
I swipe at the screen as suffocation creeps over me. I wait, too drowsy to panic.
A nearby vent hisses. The leaking tank is sealed.
Air pressure normalizes. I gulp in a deep breath, eyes watering.
Sharpness returns to my vision and mind. Why didn’t the alarm trigger? And how were all of our oxygen tanks compromised?
Like most of the vessel’s systems, its security structures and algorithms are fitted with failsafes. Malfunction is practically impossible.
I consult the engineering console again. An hour of air left. Five oxygen tanks have been detached, and something punctured the last one from the outside. Additionally, our engines are suffering from critical failure. Without access to the scanners in the cockpit, it’s hard to tell how this happened. The ship’s condition should’ve triggered the alarm. But that hasn’t happened. Sabotage is indisputable.
No alarm means no distress signal, and no distress signal means no rescue. And if it has yet to be triggered manually, either I am the first to regain consciousness or the only crewmember still living.
I scan the robotics lab. Our subject is absent from the exam table. The restraints have been severed.
No-no-no-no-NO!
Dread rattles around in my skull with the discordant timbre of a misshapen bell. I don’t have time to find out what happened.
I stumble out the door toward the bridge in a panic, almost forgetting to link the timer to my holowatch for the remaining fifty-five minutes of air. I must send out a signal, then get to an escape pod before the air runs out.
Pain flares in my leg, like a knife plunged through the side of my knee. No bones jut out. Probably a sprain. Enough to keep me at a limp and munch at my time. My white lab shoes splash through crimson puddles and past gruesome scenes in the central corridor.
Don’t look.
Something grabs my ankle. I turn frantically.
Admiral Cotte. “It’s on the bridge… Get… Ou—” She loses consciousness.
Move!
I’m staring at a fork in the hallway.
Left, escape pods. Right, bridge.
Left, me. Right, the others.
Crap…
I go right.
On my approach, the blast door doesn’t open, so I pump the handle. As I do, I peer through the door’s window. The bridge is dark; a silhouetted figure looms in the shadows.
Its movements have a lithe agility and uncanny accuracy to them.
A cold, prickling pang bursts from my heart. My mouth is dry, my hands sweaty. When my hold on the handle slips, I stop and peek in again. Nothing.
My watch chirps. Thirty-five minutes left.
Come on! Either you wait here for certain death or risk a violent end and possibly survive.
I look down at my trembling hands and take a deep breath.
Don’t look. Just open it.
Finally, the door slithers up, leaving its frame agape. The corridor’s clinical light pours in. My shadow stretches into the bridge, creasing like a jagged blanket over the command consoles. The room reeks of iron. The orange distress-signal switch taunts me.
I inch inside, my head snapping toward every corner, my eyes—dry, pallid marbles—strain in their sockets. When I notice the pilot’s screen, my heart leaps. We crash-landed on an asteroid. The rest of the fleet is nearby.
Alloy on alloy clanks to my right—short, jolted notes like muted piano strings. My contorted reflection shines on its glassy, faceless head. As the machination towers over my slight frame, a single luminous lens focuses on me, scans me. Sees me.
My stomach lurches.
The motorized hominid jerks its smooth, carbon-fiber arm.
I duck.
Its galvanized fist crashes through the wall, creasing it as easily as aluminum foil.
I leap for the captain’s console. It grabs my leg, its vice-like grip crushing me. I scream, as the tip of my finger tickles the casing of the orange switch. The android pulls me back. My shriek rakes my vocal cords. I stomp back at its arm, but it remains rigid.
I hop on my free leg while holding on to the console—stretched out like a rubber band in the hands of a mischievous child. My unexpected momentum unbalances my assailant.
Yes!
I remove the plastic casing and flip the switch.
Nothing.
Come on!
With my leg as leverage, the android forces me to the ground and pins me to it with a knee on my belly. Its frigid hand grips my neck. There’s a slow, dispassionate squeeze. My head feels like it’s gonna pop.
The computer chirps. “Distress beacon activated.”
I stare up at a vacant, featureless face of plexiglass and metal.
I fade into the void, hoping I haven’t made a terrible mistake.





This was a great and fun read! I could feel the tension and suspense in the situation. Would love to read on with this story to find out what happens to the character!
Intense and gripping (pun-intended) – Loved it!
Very enjoyable read indeed and descriptions were very vivid! Some really poetic analogies too, like the rubber band in the hands of a mischievous child!
Looking forward to your next story!
– Lau
This is a great short story. A life-changing event for many, including the protagonist, followed by the aftermath. It’s great. He is in a problem, solves it, finds another big problem, has to make a decision, then an irreversible decision and finally a conflict. You also reveal a great depth of charter in the short story. Instead of running to almost certain safety and taking the escape pod, he faces certain lethal danger to help save others. Very well done!
This story left me wanting more… what happens next?! Can’t wait to read more of your writing! I loved the vivid descriptions!
Yes, I agree!
Great sci-fi short story! The way the suspense in maintained is amazing!!!
Loved it! Vivid descriptions really helped to visualise the chaos in the first half whilst the second oozed menace and tension. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future :)
A really great story and left you waiting for more!
Very much enjoyed this. Could definitely feel the tension! Will there be a part two?
This was a fantastic read, all the way from the failing ship to the escaped assailant; I was transported to this universe, and I’m eager to know more!
Really enjoyable read. So well written. I want to know more about this world!
Wow! That was an intense, thrilling read. Well done!
So intense! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! This gave me strong “Lost in Space” vibes in a great way! I loved the image of the blue lifeless firefly dust particles at the beginning. Thank you!
THAT.ENDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!! He better survive.