By Sophia Hansen
His mottled hands shook as Viktor Engel etched characters into the damp earthen brow. “The good book says it took a word to create the world, eh?” He shuffled back a few steps, flicking the scrapings from his cracked nailbeds. “Not bad. Not bad at all.” A smile crept across his face, deepening crevices under his grizzled beard.
“Just… one… more…” He held his breath, inscribing the last sacred letter that would bring his creation to life.
The golem sat up and stared silently at the man who woke him.
“Evil times are approaching, my son. You can protect this family from harm.”
~ six years later ~
Grete stomped her foot on the kitchen tiles, daring them to break under all the energy her seven years could muster. “Not fair!”
A blond halo framed her cherubic facade, but Klay could see the storm brewing. Grete had been his charge since before she could walk.
“Schatzi, it’s not safe for you to go out right now.” Cook transferred a bubbling streusel to the window’s ledge, wiping the sides with her berry-stained apron. “We don’t know when devils may fly. There’s no cover in the field.”
Klay stiffened at the suggestion that he would ever leave his charge unprotected.
“You can just unclench those fists, Klay. Your mood looks as dark as your hair.” Cook tut-tutted and flicked flour at him. “I know you would throw yourself in front of a raging bull for our schatzi, but it takes more than that to stop a bomb.”
“Would you really, Klay?” Grete clapped her hands, bouncing on her toes. “Would you really stop a bull? Remember that time I felled out of the big, big tree? I climbed so high, right to the tip-top. Mutti was so scared, but you caught me.” She giggled. “After that they promised you would never go away.”
“Shh, child.” Cook shook her gray head. “You don’t know what you’re saying.”
“Do so!” She stuck her tongue out. “I saw the soldiers take Herr Engel away. But he told Papa that Klay would stay for me. Forever!”
“Hush.” Cook enfolded Klay with floury hands that half-hugged and half-covered his ears. “Herr Engel was the only family Klay had.”
Grete pointed and laughed as he tried to extricate himself from the powdery embrace. “Your hair’s all black and white now! You look like a cow-head!” Grete grabbed Cook’s bowl and skipped circles around Klay, dusting him with handfuls of flour. “Cowhead! Cowhead! Klay is a cowhead!”
“Careful, Schatzi. You could slip.”
Klay scanned the floor. Cook was correct. The tiles were covered with flour. His imperative was clear. Grete could not come to harm.
Sweeping his diminutive ward under one arm, he secured the ceramic bowl with the other and strode out of the cottage. Cook bustled after them, chasing down her flour bowl.
“No! No! No!” Grete shrieked, her tiny fists raining staccato beats against his arms and back. “Ow! You hurt me!”
Klay froze. Lowering Grete quickly onto a patch of scattered straw, he backed away, assessing her condition. He turned both palms up, raising his shoulders.
“You big dummy!” She thrust her fist in front of his face, displaying the skinned knuckles she’d received from pummeling him.
“Grete!” Cook fussed, snatching her bowl back. “Watch your tongue!”
“Even Papa says he’s dumb.”
Cook sighed. “That’s because he can’t speak. Dumb means mute, not stupid.”
“Well, I don’t care. He hurt my hand, and he’s a dummy.” She tried to stomp, but her soft leather shoes made little impact on the straw. Huffing through clenched teeth, Grete narrowed her eyes and landed a fierce kick on Klay’s shin. “Ow!” She glared up at her target. “I hate you!”
Her guardian hung his head, helpless against her accusation.
“Schatzi! You cannot treat our Klay so.” Cook rested her hand on Grete’s shoulder.
“He’s not your Klay. He’s mine! Mine, mine, mine!” She wriggled away, dashing past the garden gate into the open field.
“Grete! No!” Cook yelled.
Klay lumbered after the scampering child, who shrieked wildly and kept going. He could not tell if she was happy or upset, but it didn’t matter. He had to catch up to her. He had to protect her.
Grete didn’t stop until she reached the edge of the field, where it met the railroad tracks.
“Look Klay! A soldier train!” She pointed and waved excitedly. “Pick me up.”
Relieved that she’d finally stopped, Klay lifted her onto his shoulder. For a moment she was content, enthralled by the cars rolling by. Then a low rumble sounded above, different from the vibrations of the train.
Fighter planes descended in a vee, spraying ammunition onto the tracks. Bullets pinged against metal as they strafed the military boxcars. Klay swung Grete off his shoulders, cradling her against his chest as he ran back toward the house.
A blast shuddered through the air, throwing them to the ground, hurling hunks of metal everywhere. In desperation, the golem curled around the girl, trying to shield her with his body. Shrapnel lodged in his back and arms, and then stopped. Was the danger passed? Klay looked back. A fragment drove into his face, destroying the spell inscribed on his brow.
At that, the quiet guardian ceased—to protect… to move… to be. The golem was undone.
The dark choked her. It smelled like dirt. Grete fought the wall of Klay surrounding her, kicking an arm that blocked her escape.
“Move!”
Her foot went through the limb-shaped pillar, reducing it to rubble.
“What are you doing?” She grabbed his other arm and pulled, trying to make him stand. It fell apart in her hands.
Grete tried to wrap her arms around his torso. It crumbled under her embrace.
“No, Klay! No!” The child sobbed, huddled on the ground next to her protector. “You were supposed to stay. You were supposed to be mine. Forever.”






Love it! Filled with rich detail that captures this moment in time. It makes me want to read more about Klay. He seems like a great character!
Thanks Halley! Love your encouragement and support #writingbuddeh
Golems have feelings too!
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What a beautiful story! Klay was so very sympathetic as a character. Lovely historical fantasy here. I’m going to guess “Forever Mine Nevermind” by The Band Perry as the song.
I’m glad you appreciated my monster-boy. He really is a sweetheart. Good guess on the song, but not the one I was thinking of Klay entered my thoughts.
Great Story! Will there be a Sequel or Prequel?
PJ
PS: The Potter’s Hands Song?
Hey there PJ! So glad you stopped in! No, not The Potter’s Hands, but another good guess. (I wonder if I’m allowed to give out the decade as a hint?)
Don’t know about an attached story – will think on it some. Just loved this chance to work on something short and sweet.
Hey PJ – there will be a sequel – I’ll keep you posted.
PJ – the sequel is posting tomorrow! 11/20. <3
The story made me cry. How we Can take for granted those in our lives. Great job.
Thank you Cherrilynn! High praise from you – especially since you were one of the first professionals to encourage me in my writing. You pointed me to Realm Makers, and that’s where I heard about Havok! So I guess you’re to blame for those tears! ;-)
Hey there, Cherrilynn – I have a sequel to this story posting tomorrow (11/20) – thought you might like to see “the rest of the story.”
Great job, Sophia! The only possibly relevant song I can think of is Dust in the Wind.
So sorry, Tina. My iphone-response got lost in the electronic shuffle!
Thanks for reading – that is a really good guess, and now my mind is blowing in that direction – however, it’s not the song that birthed this golem gambit. (Do you know how hard it is to come up with a word for ‘story’ that starts with the letter G?)
I want to give out hints, but don’t think it’s allowed…sigh
Wonderful story!
Another good guess, but not the song. Y’all should pay attention to the names.
Thanks for reading!
Thanks so much for checking it out! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Francesca!
Thank you, Francesca! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot to me.
Wonderful story! I love the take on golems and Klay’s unique relationship with his charge.
Thank you, Kristiana!
I like golems, but they aren’t often given a POV – prob because they usually can’t speak.
Are you the same Kristiana who wrote the werewolf story? It was one of the first Havok stories I read and guessed!
I’m so glad you enjoyed Klay’s tale.
A truly bittersweet story. You create Grete’s character perfectly.
Thank you, Alex! I’ve been momming most of my life – so I can present certain facets pretty well. :-)
Oh my word, this story was so beautiful and sad :’( I’m so glad he protected her, but still… My heart hurts :( fantastic job, Sophia! <3
Thanks so much for reading – Love your stories and your spirit. My current submission doesn’t have as sad an ending – let’s see how it fares!
In case some of you haven’t found your way to the super-secret spoiler answer pages – I figure it’s safe to disclose my musical inspiration.
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From the ’50’s it’s “Earth Angel” by The Penguins
Thanks for playing!
Original, amazing! It took me a few moments to enter this story world but it was well worth it!
Thank you Mia!
Especially for taking the time to find this story. It warms my heart to hear that you enjoyed reading MINE. We have so many stories here – hope you have some time to binge!
Sounds like fun, my SW Sister!
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