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The Way of Dorius

By Richard W. Kenneth

Dorius swaggered into the arena as the crowd roared.

The Praeco shouted, “The fourth gladiator in this final combat of our games is the Emperor’s champion! Visiting us in Hispania from distant Rome, victor of sixty battles against men and beasts, I give you Dorius Gratius!”

Dorius raised his short sword in salute. A silver mask covered his face, but his ivory skin and blonde hair made him instantly recognizable. Arrayed before him were the three champions from prior days of the games. One carried a large, curved dagger, the second a trident, and the third a spear. A trumpet blast signaled the start of the match.

“Who dares attack me first?” Dorius mocked.

As the spearman rushed him, Dorius smiled. He knew he would triumph, thanks to a life-size marble statue of himself locked away in his villa outside Rome. Enchanted by a priestess he had beguiled over a decade ago, it absorbed every crushing blow and deadly slash while he bore only minor cuts and bruises that healed within a day. It also aged instead of him and carried the marks of every misdeed he’d committed, becoming unrecognizable.

After a grueling fight, his opponents yielded.

Dorius spared their lives, as was custom. The arena echoed with shouts of, “Dorius!” as he accepted the victor’s gold.

A local noble invited Dorius to a feast that night, and he accepted.

The event paled compared to Nero’s debaucheries, but Dorius reveled in hours of food, wine, and gazes of adoring fans. They marveled at a free man from a wealthy family who became a gladiator because he was bored.

He recounted his first combat years before, when he’d beaten a veteran gladiator and first earned Nero’s attention. Then he reminisced about the Emperor’s generosity and talents, from music and acting to chariot racing. He avoided discussing his friend’s violent temper and endless pursuit of pleasure.

At dawn, a drunken Dorius stumbled into his rented mansion. His slave, Marius, handed him a scroll. “Your wife has been taken by the Praetorians!”

Dorius stared in disbelief at his beloved’s hurried scrawl: “For my faith, Nero accuses me of conspiracy in the great fire I wrote you about. His guards approach. If I do not see you again in this life, I pray you find The Way to the next – Tertia.”
“We leave tomorrow for Rome!” Dorius shouted.

He spent a sleepless night torn between fear for his wife and fear that his statue might have been taken or damaged. He’d loved many women before Tertia, but no others since their marriage. Her beauty was matched only by her kindness. She loved him despite his vanity. She alone had seen his statue and kept its secret, though she prayed Dorius would someday be free of it.

Weeks later, Dorius reached his villa. His slaves rushed to meet him. “Has there been any word of Tertia?” he asked.

“No master,” they replied.

“Was anyone hurt? Anything taken or damaged?”

“No. Tertia told us not to resist. We pray for her daily.”

“Of course. I’m glad you are all safe. Prepare food while I rest.”

Dorius raced upstairs. Entering the suite he shared with Tertia, he paused to glance at the balcony where they often watched the sunset. He opened his cloak, took an iron key from around his neck, and unlocked the door to the inner chamber.

Rushing in, he was relieved to see his statue. It had acquired more scars during his months away, but it still stood tall. His exotic tapestries still adorned the walls, and jewels of every color were still in their chest.

Before he met Tertia, he’d spend hours gazing at these treasures and remembering all he’d done, good and bad, to acquire them. They were still beautiful but cold to his touch now.

Following the meal, Dorius rode alone to Nero’s palace. After waiting two hours, he was led to the Emperor.

“Where is Tertia?” Dorius demanded.

Nero pointed outside to several charred crosses near the garden. “She had been turning you away from me, my friend, and my spies said she helped others of The Way set the fire. But she died without naming anyone else.”

Dorius reached for his sword… and found nothing. The guards had taken it before the meeting.

“Tertia!” Dorius sobbed with anguish and rage. Nero embraced him. “We are better off now, friend,” the Emperor said. “I’ll find you a more beautiful woman who won’t change you. One we can both trust.”

Burying his face in Nero’s shoulder, Dorius began tightening his arms to crush the man.

Then a vision of Tertia shimmered before Dorius. “Stop, my love,” she whispered. “Vengeance will condemn you and those in our household I died to protect. Seek the freedom I found.”

Dorius released his grip. Nero coughed. “That’s quite an embrace. Your Emperor thanks you.”

Dorius bowed, reclaimed his sword, and returned home.

He gathered his slaves and said, “Nero killed Tertia and others. Do any of you believe as she did?”

“She taught us all The Way,” Marius replied.

“I understand now. Follow me.”

Dorius led them upstairs and unlocked the inner chamber. “Come in,” he said. He opened the chest of jewels. “This now belongs to you. Use it to flee Rome and Nero’s madness. Tertia would want that. Come back at dawn, and I’ll have your travel documents.”

The slaves took the chest and departed. Dorius closed the chamber door behind them. He wrote letters granting each slave their freedom and explaining how to reach Hispania. Having honored Tertia’s sacrifice, he prayed to find what she had found.

Yet his disfigured statue mocked him. Nothing he’d done that night had removed even one scratch! Then Dorius realized the statue didn’t just reflect his wrongs and prevent his death. It embodied his fear of death. Tertia’s freedom lay in overcoming that fear.

Dorius stood and drew his sword.

“For freedom!” he screamed and swung his blade at the statue’s neck.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Richard W. Kenneth Richard W. Kenneth is an engineer by day and an author by night. His flash fiction and short stories include thrillers, science fiction, horror and fantasy. He also been known to write poetry on occasion and has a novel in progress. His work has appeared in Havok, Havok’s “Prismatic” anthology, Last Girls Club and the Icarus Writing Collective’s “Monstrous” anthology. Find his Internet nexus here: https://linktr.ee/richardwkenneth


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  • This was an enjoyable, sad read. Mr. Kenneth has constructed an engaging story. By beginning with a gladiator fight he caught my attention and kept me reading.

    After reading it, I wonder what would have happened to the story of Rome if Dorius had finished off Nero, and how that assassination would that have affected The Way. That alternate history would make for an intriguing novel.

    • Thanks for the feedback Chris! Those are interesting questions you pose about a possible alternate history. I will definitely keep those in mind for possible future stories.

  • Brilliant alternate version of Dorian! As the author of “The Sculpture of Dorian Gray” which ran earlier this week, I was fascinated by your premise of a different kind of 3-D portrait of this character.

    • I’m so glad I enjoyed the story. Thank you for the feedback. I enjoyed your story too. It is great that Havok’s multiverse concept give us so much room to explore different ideas.

  • I liked it, as least as much as Chasing Blue. Not a lot of changes since I last saw it, but I think they give it a better ending. Several others have told me they liked it

    • Thanks Sue. I’m glad to hear you and your friends liked it. Glad you also like my story “Chasing Blue”.

  • Interesting and novel variation of the original story. Well written and thought out. Definitely Nero was no hero!

  • This story has the marks of an author who knows the multifarious stinging machinations of a power-mad tyrant. Sure, you can see if with Tertia’s unjust death, that’s tyrant level stuff. But I mean that we can see it in the little details: Dorius being forced to wait two hours to see Nero. TWO HOURS. Even the most domineering of MDs see that as excessive. I’m sorry for what you’ve had to go through, Mr. Kenneth, to have gained such sad knowledge.

    • Hello Librarian. Thank you for the feedback. I am blessed to say I haven’t personally had to deal with any tyrants, even though there are many in the world. The story was based only on imagination and research, but I’m honored to know that I portrayed Dorius in a way that you could relate to him and his experience.

    • Thank you Theo. Getting a story into 1000 words is definitely a challenge. But I’m glad it gave you things to ponder.

    • Thank you Greg. I’m happy to hear you liked the imagery. Sometimes picking just the right details in a few words is a challenge.

  • Great story! I’m left wanting to read more. Really captivating story that kept my attention from beginning to end.

    • You’re very welcome Zachary. I think hope is important to portray, since everyone needs it sometimes. And I like to imagine that Dorius found what he was hoping for.

    • Thank you, Luca. I’m glad you liked the story. It was fun to explore how finding true love might affect Dorian.

    • Thanks Tracy! I’m glad you liked the setting. Researching gladiators led me to Nero and then to the Great Fire and his persecution of The Way, so I’m glad I found a way to pull it all together that you enjoyed.

  • I really enjoyed this take on Dorian Gray! The original Dorian had no link to The Way, and thus didn’t have a chance at the hope filling Dorius at the end.

    It feels a bit rushed at times, but I know that is a result of trying to restrict it to such a short length. I can imagine this being filled out in a novel, developing Dorius and his wife slowly, and then seeing how the story continues after her death.

    Keep up the good work!

    • Thanks Ben. I’m glad you liked this version of Dorian and that I could bring a little more hope than is found in his original story. The thousand word limit always means a few (or more) good details have to get shortened or cut, but the Havok editors are awesome at helping with that, and sometimes it’s better to leave a few things to the reader’s imagination.

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