By Abigail Falanga
She turns as I approach. Girl in a tan hoodie with wisps of long blond hair. The way her hood is up, I assume she’s wearing an IdentMask, and I’m right. Black haze conceals her face. Her eyes are red, glowing Xs, and her mouth a sewn-shut line. It’s a cheap, basic mask, unlike the sophisticated and fully animated face I wear clipped to my hat, and it’s freaking me out a little.
Clients often wear IdentMasks. This kind of transaction makes them uncomfortable; it’s something they’d rather not be recognized doing.
Just like they often pick strange places to meet. Maybe it has some meaning for them. Usually, it’s just another way to hide who they really are.
Like here, by the sea. Out in the middle of nowhere near a lonely stretch of highway with few buildings in sight. Garbage and graffiti everywhere, so it’s not even pretty—except for the gray-blue ocean lapping fifty feet below against the rocks.
A place I haven’t thought about in a while.
Snow, drifting down through headlights. Not enough to be dangerous, though, with luck, that’s what they’ll put the accident down to.
Shake it off. Don’t hang on to these things. Just let them be, and focus on what’s happening now…
The girl is very still, not shifting her weight, hands slightly clenched. Strange. They often move around a lot, nervous.
She doesn’t say anything, so I get straight to business. “So, what’s this job?”
She paid ten grand up front in cryptocurrency. Clearly, this is a big commission and I’m not interested in waiting around before doing it.
“I want someone killed.” The girl speaks for the first time, a low, musical voice humming with something almost familiar.
“Okay.” Assassination isn’t usual for me, but I can go there. “Who?”
“Why,” she says. “Ask why, not who.”
“Okay.” Fine, I’ll play along. She’s paying the bills, after all. “Why?”
“A girl was killed here a year ago. Mary.” She points at the word scrawled in black spray paint on a boulder.
“And you want her killer taken care of? Can do. But I’ll need more details.”
She nods slowly. “She was happy, loved her family. Didn’t deserve to die. She was driving home from work. Her car was hacked and went over the sea wall.”
That’s how I would’ve done it. Find the target’s weakness—predictable or unreliable transport, shoddy firewall—plant a virus or tell the system it has a flaw somewhere, then get out of there. Clean, simple, as hands-off as possible.
But hit jobs are different. You have to get their online persona and go after that.
A persona integrates the registered IdentMask with their online accounts and smart tech. It’s the best way to protect a user identity. Crafted, then dropped if necessary, to allow personal reputation, credit rating, and life to remain unaffected. Or so they say.
But a persona can be hacked. Like any other system, I can find my way in through chinks in the code. And… I don’t have to lift the mask and see the person inside. Quick and clean.
“I want the one who killed her.” The girl’s voice has gone cold—the kind of cold that burns. “I want to make him pay.”
Shivers race down my spine for some reason I don’t bother wondering about. “Okay, sure. Give me some more details on how she died, and I can back-trace to find the hacker.”
“She was driving a 2025 silver Nemesis, registration number 31785M. 8:15 p.m. on January sixth.”
“Got it. Go on.”
“The steering system went out.”
“That’s traceable. Next?”
“She was singing along to her favorite Beatles song.”
Good choice, I thought, as I saw the track she’d selected from Streaming. It was just a blip on my screen as I changed the setting on the steering column to “lock.” The steering algorithm was the easiest to hack on these Nemesis models…
“Uh…” I clear my throat, shaking off the memory of that night when I’d sat in my ScreenPit where it was warm so I didn’t have to imagine the cold. “Go on.”
“Light from a streetlamp fell through the windscreen just before it happened.”
I saw her face through the dash cam. She was very pretty. Joy lit her face more than the light. Strawberry-red lipstick…
“You didn’t even pause,” she goes on. “Just fingered that chewed-up goatee and hit Enter.”
My stomach drops and I stop making notes on my ArmScreen to stare at her, trying to get some hint, trying to understand who she is. Another hacker? But, why…?
She speaks now in a voice so low that the clatter-crash of waves almost drowns it. “Still haven’t gotten rid of the goatee, I see. It’s caught the yogurt you had for breakfast.”
How—? She can’t possibly see my face! “Who the hell are you?” I waver between starting a virtual attack at her IdentMask or a physical attack. “What are you playing at?”
She’s a liar. She couldn’t possibly know. She still makes no move.
She’s just provoking me.
My hands are shaking. I know, I don’t know how, but I know that she’s there because I killed Mary.
And I make up my mind.
I jump forward, raking off her hood to see—
Nothing.
Black haze. No face. No head.
“What is this?” I choke at something beyond comprehension.
“Revenge,” she says, and dissolves so that nothing is between me and the sea wall edge.





WHAT a twist. Oh my word. The tension was beautifully done, and so was the characterization…oh, this was FANTASTIC and I loved it!!!!
Oh, good! I’m glad that twist got you (maniacal author laugh)
Thanks!
Wow, this was SO good! Such an eerie vibe, and the characters are so VIVID. I wasn’t quite expecting that ending, either. O_O
Thank you!
I’m glad the characters were vivid – they’re not the sort I really want to hang around, so getting them right is a wonderful success.
And the eerie vibe worked – woohoo!
StorySpinner aka Abigail Falanga
Love the twists and the suspense! Nicely done. The only song that came to mind (and I’m probably off base) is Who are You, by The Who.
Thanks so much!
Though, I’m afraid that isn’t the correct song ;)
Whoa! :o this was really intense but so good. Was not expecting the ending. Great job, Abigail!!
Thank you! :D
You’re welcome! :D
Very nice, and a good creepy ending.
Thanks!
Intense and clever! If you play with fire… Well done Abigail.
Well, it’s *virtual* fire so maybe you can get away with playing with it… ;)
Thanks so much!
Ooo! Very well done! Nice job getting past “it’s just business” to “it’s personal.”
Creepy well done.
Thank you!
And well put :D
Abigail Falanga, aka StorySpinner
Really well-executed (pun intended).
Wow. That pun works on so many levels that it earns a deep groan!
Thanks!
Abigail Falanga aka StorySpinner
Very nice! I good revenge story is always a satisfying story! :)
Very cool mystery. Love the intertwined memories of his as she gives him information. Great read! Loved the tech stuff too.
Is the song “cross eyed mary” by Jethro Tull?
Good guess but try again!
I love the IdentMask concept. Very interesting worldbuilding!
Got Job! Well paced. Kept my interest and had a surprise ending
Very creepy and cool futuristic world. Well done! I had chills by the end.
Such lovely comments – thank you all!
Song Clue: I dropped a huge hint about which artist the song is by, so just look for that. A character name is another hint. But the theme of this story fit in very well with the song, too. Shall we say (riddle-like) that the title of the song is what the main character cannot do? ;)
That was fantastic. Drew me right in and kept me all the way through. Is it “Let it Be” by the Beatles?
Thank you so much! It was an eerie story to write, and I am so glad it made a good read :D
And, you’re right! “Let It Be” is the correct song. Now I have it in my head again, and it will never sound the same after using it in this story. Yikes!
– Abigail Falanga
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