By H. M. Hershberger
The night air smells like cinnamon and fryer oil from the cart vendors down below. Swing jazz floats on the breeze from the club three shops down. I tap my fingers moodily on the rusty edge of the fire escape. It’s Independence Day, but I don’t feel much like celebrating.
Tomorrow, my brother leaves for war.
For as long as I can remember, we’ve been Davie and Jo. The Baxter twins, the matched set. Chaos on the rocks, shaken not stirred.
The man who delivered the call-up papers looked sorry, but the ruler-straight creases in his pants and the spit-shined buttons of his jacket belied that. He’s government and my folks don’t trust old Uncle Sam farther than we can throw him.
See, my people are magic—well somethin’ like that. It’s really some sorta subatomic manipulation I can’t make hide nor hair of, but magic’s a simpler term.
Not me though, I’m about as Gifted as a rock, but Davie’s got pyro-somethin’-or-other. My idiot twin brother with his snarky, lopsided grin––who’s only ever used his sparks for fireworks—is being sent off to die.
The messenger tried to make a joke about charbroiled Nazis, but it wasn’t funny. War’s not a funny thing. Tonight marks the last time we’ll be in the same place for who knows how long.
I don’t know if I’ll ever see him again.
The Cordell’s oldest boy was in Italy. They got a telegram two days ago and haven’t come out since. The star in their window is gold now, gold like Midas’s daughter. Dead.
I don’t want to put a gold star in our window for Davie. I don’t want to lose my best friend and other half. I don’t want to be just Johanna Baxter, the poor girl whose brother went to war and never came back.
Ma’s apple cake sits like a stone in my stomach. She scrimped and saved our sugar rations for weeks to make it, to have a treat for Davie’s last night. It tasted like ashes instead.
The fire escape creaks all of a sudden.
“Ya’ know,” Davie drawls from behind me, “you’re actin’ like I’m already dead.”
“Feels like it,” I mutter.
“Have a little faith, Jo,” he says indignantly. “I’m not that clumsy.”
I snort softly, but don’t respond. The lights of the shops that line our street twinkle in the dusk, sending the alley shadows swinging like they’re doing the Charleston.
He drops beside me, sending the fire escape groaning dangerously. “Hey, I’ll be fine. I survived the Incident of ‘36, remember? No way Ol’ Sauerkraut can top that.”
I shake my head at the memory. “How could I forget? You nearly leveled the Polka’s shop.”
Davie grins, lopsided and smirky. “Still here, ain’t I? You’re not gettin’ rid of me that easy.”
“Promise?”
He holds up his hand solemnly. “I’ll even pinkie swear.”
“You swear to come back, David Baxter?” I stab my finger into his chest. “Cause if you don’t, I’ll come get you myself!”
Davie snorts. “War’d be over in a week if we let you loose on the krauties.”
“Davie.”
“Fine, fine. I swear, on pain of being dragged back from Germany by my ear.”
We link little fingers and shake on it.
“And don’t you forget it,” I warn, flicking his nose for emphasis.
Davie shakes his head and stands. “Geez, what’d I do to get saddled with such a deadbeat sister?”
“Dolt.”
His eyes sparkle with mischief. “You know you love me.”
I raise an eyebrow and haul myself to my feet. “Do I?”
“Yep,” he says with another crooked smile. “Come on, we’re going to the roof.” He snags my hand and drags me up towards the top of our apartment building, the ancient stairs threatening to disintegrate the whole way up.
The roof is oddly deserted for a holiday, but then the whole building knows that Davie’s been called up, so maybe it isn’t so strange. The people of 647 Chester Street are good folks.
Pushing up the grease-stained sleeves of his tatty work shirt, Davie rubs his hands together like a magician preparing to perform some grand trick.
“What does the lady request first?” he asks with a bow.
I roll my eyes and aim a halfhearted kick at his knee. “A flower.”
“What type? Rose, petunia, lily—”
“Pick one,” I say, chuckling. “I don’t care: any’ll do.”
Copper gold sparks erupt from my brother’s palms and shoot skywards, falling back to Earth in the elegant petals of a lily. They light up the roof with a rich glow, chasing away the shadows and turning the evening rosy. The early stars disappear under the brilliance, and I stand open-mouthed in awe. Davie’s an artist every day, but this is something special.
“Beautiful,” I whisper.
“Yeah?” Davie asks with a secretive smile. “Watch this.”
A cascade of sparks leaps from his hands into the night, and I watch transfixed as firebirds flit to and fro and dragons soar past weeping willows. In the sparklight Davie appears ethereal, a sprite or fairy lad from another world entirely.
The music down the street picks up and he holds out a hand. “Dance with me?”
I take it with a grin, and we bob and weave to the cheerful sound of the trumpet under the light of sparks and stars. I close my eyes and spin, a laugh spilling from my lips with the joy of spending time with my twin.
I memorize every sensation, the warm July breeze on my skin, the flap and snap of my skirt, the tune the band plays. The smell of machine oil and the way Davie’s chestnut curls dance to their own beat as he spins me ‘round and ‘round.
I engrave this moment into my heart and two months later, when we hang that awful golden star in our window, I dance alone to the trumpet’s refrain under a sparkless sky and try desperately not to cry.






Ohh wow… I want to cry with the ending… that was so good!!
Oh my word…. this was so heartbreaking and sweet… I love this so much!!
Excellent work!
Allie – thank so much for the kind comment. I’m blessed to hear you enjoyed it!
smsetzer- thank you kindly. To God be the glory!
Wow! I was not prepared for that last paragraph. Beautiful story!
You drew me in and made me care about these two…I’m mad about the ending now. :( Great job!
i’m not crying… you’re crying…
Oh wow, this is beautiful and heartrending.
Alan Gerig, hmulderly, HulaP1x1e,
Thank you all so much for your kind words and sentiments. Writing this piece was a blast and I’m really glad that it’s landing with readers. You humble me and I’m blessed to create something that you’ve enjoyed. Thank you for reading. To God be the glory!
My heart! I’m this close to crying. This is such a vividly written story and so, so deeply touching. Well done < 3
What a beautiful, heartfelt story. I hope to read more of your writing in future!
Awww… wow… this is beautiful and so well done–I felt like crying with the ending. This was amazing!!!
I’ve not been super on top of comments, but thank you all so incredibly much for your kind words and for reading! I’m so blessed to hear that this story has made you smile or laugh or almost cry. I know I’ve said it before, but I will say it again. To God be the glory.
Enjoyed the story immensely! What a talent you’re sharing, if I knew where to do it I’d give you 5 stars! Keep up the good work! I would love to read your stories, even if they don’t get published!
We give our sons too freely to the European death cult.
Don’t worry about it, clearly I didn’t need my heart or anything…
Beautiful job.
Beautiful! I love how you captured the gravity of war while also interweaving a strong sibling bond and a message of faith ❤️
The writing is beautiful! and—oh my heart, that ending. Thank you for sharing.
Such a beautiful but sad story.
I was not expecting to cry on my lunch break! What an amazing and bittersweet story! I love the world you’ve created.
A beautiful story and vivid descriptions!
Such a beautiful story. You captured the emotion perfectly. Excuse me now while I go cry!
This is such a beautiful, yet sad story. Very well written!
Wow. I want to cry too! That was gorgeous!