By Hannah Muldery
âConnor, are you awake?â
I crept to the edge of Auntieâs boat, grasping an unfinished bag of woven eelgrass and kelp. Kiriâs face widened in a grin, revealing the gap from her missing tooth. A chilly breeze tugged her mass of dark curls as I joined her on the dock. She leaned forward. Avoiding her gaze, I mimicked her with a gulp, our foreheads and noses touching in her villageâs greeting. After two months, my face still warmed a bit.
I stepped back and rubbed my nose. âWhat is it, Kiri?â
âPÄpÄ and the elders are hovering around the generator.â She grabbed my hand and I let her pull me along. âI think itâs broken.â
While most floating villages used sun-heated slats to separate the salt and water, Kiriâs float had a generator-powered desalination hut. If it was broken, Auntie Catriona would sail to the next one, dragging me along.
Kiri squeezed my hand. âYou can fix it.â
I stopped.
Auntieâs voice echoed in my mind. âHide your gift, boy. People are selfish. Theyâll use you for your talents until you canât move your worn fingers.â
âI donât think I can.â
Kiriâs hand slipped from mine, but her mouth quirked. âYou mended the bilge pump in PÄpÄâs boat.â
âBecause we werenât supposed to play in it.â I made a face. âDo you want your pÄpÄ mad at me?â
Her eyes twinkled. âWe wouldnât have gotten in trouble. Come on.â
She tugged me across the village, the wooden dock gently swaying under us. We wove through whalebone huts stretched with seagull leather, homes of woven eelgrass and bamboo, and water gardens full of cabbage, carrots, and wheat. Our bare feet pattered on the dock as we skirted around the large red Marae building where Auntie and I were welcomed to the village.
The windmill stood on the edge of the float, steady morning wind turning its blades, with the elders and Kiriâs pÄpÄ clustered around it. Kiri brought me over.
The largest man turned. âYou two are up already?â He wasnât only Kiriâs pÄpÄ. He was the Ariki. Blotting out the rising sun, he towered over me, dark curls like Kiriâs braided up in an elaborate style. White feathers and a bone comb poked out.
I shrank back. It wasnât his size or the sprawling tattoos across his tan face that made me feel small. The Ariki could kick me out of the village.
Away from Kiri.
She stepped up to him. âConnor is going to fix the generator, PÄpÄ.â
He smiled at me, but impatience kept it from reaching his eyes. âBest stay out of the way, poi. Let the adults work.â He turned back to the grass capeâclad elders and they resumed their talk.
âThe wind is only constant in the morning.â
âThe Coral Seaâs wind is steady.â
âWe canât return there. Numerous villages have made fishing poor.â
Iâd repaired generators. But they needed something newâcontinual power. The ocean rocked against the float. A larger wave splashed my pale feet. Further out, kelp brushed the surface as the ocean swayed. Days ago, Iâd swum in the kelp forests, fish watching me⊠their fins using the same back and forth motion.
My eyes rested on the windmillâs blades. Like giant fins. Fueled by my new idea I stepped toward the leaders.
And stopped.
Auntie claimed sheâd been controlled, forced into harsh, constant work whenever people discovered her âgift.â But in the two years Iâd traveled with her, only my inventions had been completed. And sheâd let none leave our boat.
Over my shoulder, Kiri smiled, her eyes large and hopeful as a seal. She knew I had skills and no trouble had come from it. Kiri was my friend.
âAriki, sir?â My throat was as dry as the eelgrass in my hand. A dozen eyes stared down at me. âWhat if you put a propeller in the ocean? It never stops moving.â
As if on cue, the wind died.
He stifled a sigh, annoyance in his eyes.
My throat tightened. I wasnât just some kid.
âYouâre with Catriona Douglas, one of our regular roamers?â
I nodded.
He lowered to one knee. âThe ocean ebbs and flows, but our generator only works in one direction.â
I shuffled my toes against rough bamboo joints. âI can change that.â
His eyebrows raised, the tattoo lines following. âYouâve had ten summers?â
âEleven.â
Kiri joined me. I gripped my bag. And the last piece clicked in place. Brushing aside Auntieâs warnings, I held out my half-finished backpack. âWeave propellers out of grass and bamboo poles. Iâll remake the generator.â
Whispers sifted through the group.
I glanced at my hands. âI helped once on another float,â I lied.
He rubbed his chin. The others murmured.
The Arikiâs eyes peered into me, but this time I saw trust in them.
âA wise suggestion, poi. Koraka.â A younger man straightened. âTake him to the Marae for whatever tools he needs.â
Several hours passed while I worked.
Gears and magnets turned in my mind, guiding my hands. I detached the copper wound piece and fixed it to move with the waves. Its motion through the magnet ring would generate the energy we needed.
Kiri and the others returned from weaving blades as I made my last adjustment.
âI hope this works,â I said.
She grinned. âIt will.â
I waited, standing as tall as my thin frame allowed, while the Ariki examined my work. With a nod and command, he and several elders lowered the propeller into the ocean and secured it to the float.
I connected the generator.
Koraka jogged off to check the desalination huts.
Constant waves rocked the blades.
Kiri grabbed my hand.
âIt works!â came the cry.
âI knew you could do it, Connor.â Kiri hugged me tight.
I grinned, hiding the relief fighting to weaken my head. The elders guided us to the Marae for the noon meal, Kiriâs pÄpÄ beside me, his hand resting on my shoulder.





The world building was quick and interesting in this one. Enjoyed it!
Thank you! The world is a part of my WIP novel, so I loved getting to develop a bit more of it in this story đ„°
I love stories like this! We all have gifts that can benefit the world. Thanks for sharing this!
Thank you! Yes, we all do. No hiding it under a bushel đ
Youâre welcome!
Deftly told Hannah! I loved all the details and the last line… you deserve a đ€ from Paul Hollywood!
Shucks, thanks! Iâm going to go cry now đ„č
Wonderfully written! You paint a beautiful picture with words!
I’m glad he didn’t hide his talent. Great story!
Thank you! It was a brave step for him.
Good story. I like him taking the risk for his friendship with Kin.
Thank you! So many good things require taking risks.
Neat story!!
Thank you!!
So good Hannah! The world buildingâs details are amazing. And I love a good story about friendship :)
Thank you!! I do to! Friends are the best đ„°
Hannah, I enjoyed how Connor chose to be brave and help others with his gift. We should all share the gifts God has given us to show love to others. The way you have with this story. Thank you!