By Katie Hanna
I smell the humans before I see them.
Their oily scent mixes with the sharp freshness of wet snow. I catch a whiff of woodsmoke and the faint crackle of a campfire.
My hackles rise. I growl deep in my throat. My wolf pups are asleep in their den a safe distance from here, but I still donāt like humans invading my territory. What if they venture farther into the forest? My pups could be in danger.
Itās time to investigate. I pad along soundlessly, following the musky scent.
Pine trees grow thick along the ridge, blocking my view of the shallow ravine below. Thatās where the human scent is coming from. The crackling flames grow louder as I approach, along with a murmur of voices. The first is gruff and wary, the second younger and higher-pitched.
Thatās a bad sign. Humans with cubs to protect are apt to be reckless, even violent.
A gap opens in the dense woods, and I spot the intruders. An adult female sits cross-legged on a fallen log, the campfire flickering on her weathered face. A young, scrawny male huddles beside her, warming his hands over the fierce blaze.
They shiver in their thin jackets and trousers. Judging by their clothing, not to mention the heavy guns strapped to their shoulders, these must be soldiers. Hunters and woodsmen always dress more warmly before entering the forest.
Studying their outfits, I notice something else odd. The womanās uniform is brown, while the boyās is blue. Like wolves, soldiers cluster in packs, and their colors signal their loyalties. If theyāre not from the same pack, why would these two soldiers share a campfire?
The woman shifts, prodding the coals. Firelight gleams on her gun barrel. I growl softly, baring my teeth. It doesnāt matter why these soldiers have chosen to mingle across pack lines. They have invaded my territory. Ventured too close to my sleeping pups. They will pay the price.
I slip between the pine trees like a shadow. I canāt let the soldiers see me until the last possible moment. Surprise is crucial when facing humans armed with guns. I keep an eye on them through the gaps in the trees. My ears are cocked to catch their words, too, though I understand little of human speech.
āAre we safe here, Rahel?ā The male childās voice trembles, though he tries to hold it steady. He seems too young to be a soldier.
āSafe enough for now.ā The woman grimaces, her slumped shoulders betraying her weariness. āKeep your guard up, Altan.ā
Exhausted as they are, I may not need to kill them. The sight of a wolf may be enough to send them fleeing.
The trees give way to a shallow slope, littered with rocks and smeared with muddy snow. I poise myself at the opening, ready to leap. My belly hugs the ground. My muscles coil in taut anticipationā
Another human bursts from the trees at the other end of the ravine.
An adult male, big and hulking as an angry bear, wearing the same brown uniform as the woman. But he points his gun at her, shouting a word I donāt recognize.
āTraitor!ā His bellow echoes like a peal of thunder. āTraitor!ā
Quicker than lightning, the female soldier thrusts the boy behind the fallen log. She throws herself on top of him, shielding him with her body. The muzzle of her weapon peeks over the log, and the stillness explodes into gunfire.
The man returns her shots. The loud cracks deafen me like ice splitting in the springtime.
I should slink into the shadows. Let the humans destroy each other, eliminating the threat. But if the boy and the woman die while the man survivesā¦
He is willing to kill a cub of his own kind.
What might he do to my pups?
With a savage growl, I gather my limbs and spring. I hurtle through the air, the snowy ground a blur beneath me. When my paws hit the wet earth, I bound forward, barking furiously.
The manās gaze swivels to me. His ruddy cheeks drain white.
I charge toward him like an unswerving bullet.
His shout is slurred with fear, but this time, itās a word I know. āWolf!ā
He swings his gun barrel away from the woman to point it at me. But before he can fire, another crack rings out. The man topples forward, falling on his face.
As I expected, the woman took advantage of my disruption to deliver the fatal shot.
I dash past her, my paws churning the snow. Iāve lost the advantage of surprise. My only hope is to cross the ravine and reach the cover of the trees before she decides to shoot me, too. Every muscle strains to reach my goal. My lungs burnāmy flanks heaveā
But no gunshot shatters the silence as I run.
At last, I dive between the trees. The welcome darkness of the woods embraces me. I skid to a halt behind a gnarled pine trunk, panting for breath. When the stillness remains unbroken, I risk a glance into the clearing.
The woman tugs the boy to a sitting position. Her palm brushes the snow from his cheek, the same way I might lick dirt from my pupsā faces.
āHeās dead, Altan.ā Her gruff voice wavers a little. āThe wolf saved us.ā
She spots me watching from the shadows. Our eyes lock. Slowly, deliberately, she slips her gun from her shoulder and lays it down in the snow.
Human language may be a mystery to me, but her message is clear. I respect you.
I lower my head a fraction, allowing my tail to droop slightly. Likewise.
Weāre not the same, but maybe we can exist side by side⦠she protecting her family, and I protecting mine. Time will tell.
I turn and slip into the forest, trotting homeward to my pups.





Awesome story! So much left unsaid, but the desire to protect our young is universal. Beautiful!
Thank you so much, Arlan! I’m glad you liked it! I enjoyed exploring what Rahel and the wolf had in common–the need to protect their cubs.
A lovely piece on how the roles we play can form bonds with others… :)
Thank you, Rose! I’m glad you enjoyed it! <3
Such an excellent short story–and from a unique point of view! You really captured the wolf’s ‘voice.’ <3
Thank you!! That’s the part I was most nervous about, trying to write from an animal’s point of view and really make it SOUND like an animal, not a human brain in a wolf’s body.
I’m so glad you liked the story! :D
Great story! Interesting to get the wolf’s perspective for a change.
Thanks!! Yes, I think wolves are usually the “other,” the “monster” seen from a human’s point of view… so I wanted to mix things up!
What a lovely and powerful story! My mother’s heart was warmed.
I’m so glad to hear that! Thank you!! <3
touching personification. engaging dialog and story.
Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed it! :D
The epic Rahel is back! And wow, I absolutely adored this parallel of a mother’s love and protection. So poignant and spectacularly done! *applauses*
Thank you, Christine!! That really means a lot! :D
Yes! Rahel is BACK, BABY! *does Emperor’s New Groove pose*
Oh my goodness, I love this story SO MUCH!
I kept grinning in delight the whole way through, especially at moments that were particularly ironic, clever, interesting, or heartwarming. I got very invested from beginning to end. I loved the ride the story took me on and everything that happened as it unfolded!
I especially loved the characters and their goals and interactions–including bonds, fierce love, protection, and respect. And the wolf’s perspective was so fun and made me see the world in a new way.
Ahhh! THANK YOU, Mary!! I’m so happy you enjoyed reading this story! <3
Yessss! You know how much I love protective characters–whether they're human or not ;) I was really nervous about trying to get inside the wolf's head, but I liked how it turned out!
Love this story so much šŗš¤ amazing job as always, fren!!!
Thank you, buddy!!! The wolf emoji you picked is SO CUTE!
I LOVED this continuation of Rahel’s story! And the wolf pov was great!
Thank you!! I’m glad you enjoyed it! I thought it would be fun to get “fresh eyes” on Rahel and Altan’s situation.
AHHHH I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCHHHHH! <3 <3 <3 I love how you chose a wolf POV, and the fierce tenderness just melts my heart.
THANK YOU, dear Beka! You inspired me to write it with your love of wolves! <3
Well done. the ending is my favorite.
“Weāre not the same, but maybe we can exist side by side⦠she protecting her family, and I protecting mine. Time will tell.” Beautiful.
Thank you, Grace! So glad you enjoyed it! <3