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The Firebird Rose

By Beka Gremikova

The domed turrets of the Little Palace blazed a fierce rose-red. The color of magic. The color of a curse.

Mariya had to get there.

But a line of Rusakian soldiers blocked her road, their blood-red shields reminding her of all the lives lost during their occupation of her city. Behind them, Prince Illya sat trapped in the Palace, cursed into a beast by a Rusakian enchantress so Tsar Ivan could invade Tenkev.

Mariya shivered in the cold evening air and slipped back into the townhouse she rented with Papa. “The guards are still there. We need the roses, Papa.”

He sat slumped on a stool, running his fingers through his greying hair as he stared at the struggling rose bush in front of him. Not a single bud burst on the sickly branches of the plant they’d saved when Tsar Ivan destroyed Tenkev’s famous roses.

Papa sighed deeply. “Nothing, Mariya.”

She pulled up a chair, perching beside him. “Any news from the Firebird operatives in the palace? Can they smuggle us roses from the Inner Sanctum?”

He shook his head. “No. I fear… Tsar Ivan’s destroyed the Firebirds.” His voice broke.

She hugged Papa as he wept, her own dark fears swirling through her mind. At least I don’t have to leave him now. I won’t have to leave him alone. It haunted her to imagine him in this tiny house, with nothing but memories of fallen comrades to keep him company.

Yet he expected her to leave, to save the future of this nation. To break into the Little Palace to provide Prince Illya companionship—and perhaps find a way to break his curse. After all, as Papa liked to remind her, she was a codebreaker. And what was magic but a different kind of code?

She sucked in a deep breath and hugged Papa tighter. Why does it have to be me?

Rapid, pounding knocks shook the doorframe.

“Down!” Papa hissed, and they both dropped to the floor, out of sight of the window. Mariya’s heart thundered. Beside her, Papa trembled. Had Rusakians learned of their connections to the Little Palace and tracked them down?

More knocks, but softer. Mariya crept to the window and peeked through the thick curtains.

A nearby gaslamp illuminated an empty front stoop.

Another knock.

She sucked in a breath. The knock was real. Which meant—

She ran to the door, cracking it open slightly. “Codeword,” she breathed into the cold night air.

“Firebird,” a deep voice answered.

She yanked the door open fully and backed away as the invisible visitor clomped over the threshold. The door swung shut, and a tall man flickered into view. A crimson Firebird, the symbol of the royal family, emblazoned his robes.

She gasped. “Lord Peter!” Prince Illya’s uncle and closest advisor held a delicate flower within his grasp, and Mariya nearly wept. A rose. And its magic worked.

But now she’d have to leave Papa.

Mariya curtsied unsteadily as Papa offered his stool to Lord Peter, who collapsed onto it, hands on his knees. “I was able to smuggle out one rose from the Inner Sanctum,” Lord Peter said. “That was all.”

“What about the other Firebirds?” Papa paced the room, scratching at his beard. “I’ve heard nothing for weeks!”

Lord Peter shook his head. “As far as I know, Illya’s alone in there. Everyone else is… gone. I tried to turn the prince invisible and smuggle him out, but…” Lord Peter’s shoulders sagged, and even his curly brown beard seemed to wilt. “His curse counteracts the rose magic.” Turning his haggard face to Mariya, he offered her the flower. “But maybe your codebreaking can crack the curse entirely.”

Mariya glanced at Papa. His eyes glistened, but he smiled at her, hopeful.

He deserves that hope. Her lips trembled, but she blinked back her tears, straightened her shoulders, and took the rose.

I’m ready, she thought to the flower. I stand with my people. No matter the cost. The rose thrummed with warmth, blooming a brighter red as its magic tingled from her fingers into her limbs.

When she looked down, she saw only the worn floorboards.


Mariya scanned the stoic faces of the line of Rusakian guards. About sixty paces behind them stood a door, glinting the same stark red as the rose. Lord Peter had left it unlocked for her—if she could reach it.

One man shifted slightly, and her heartbeat quickened. She gripped the rose’s stem.

They can’t see you. You’re all right. She let out a breath, refocusing her gaze on a gap between two shivering, glaze-eyed guards.

Holding her breath and making herself as small as possible, she slid between the two guards. Once she was thirty paces away, she broke into a run, dashing right to the door.

It opened onto the withered palace gardens, and she hurried through them, scrambling up the Little Palace’s once-grand front steps.

Inside, she found Illya in a receiving room, an untouched cup of tea before him. Dark fur sprouted from his limbs, though royal red robes covered most of it. One of his ears, shaped like a horse’s, tilted toward Mariya as she entered.

Done, she thought to the rose, and its magic subsided, making her visible again.

“Uncle Peter said you’d come.” Illya’s voice was soft, genteel. His shoulders slumped. “I’m sorry he dragged you into this.”

Mariya pictured Papa’s smile, thought of all the sacrifices he’d made to give her this chance to save their nation. She wiped at the dried tears stuck to her cheeks, took a deep breath, and curtsied. “They didn’t drag me. This is my duty and honor.” As she straightened, she held out the rose to him. “Your people stand with you, Prince Illya.”

Illya swallowed. Then he reached out and took the rose, careful not to scratch her with his claws. As he met her gaze with glittering eyes, his lips curled into a smile. “Thank you for coming,” he whispered.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Beka Gremikova hails from the Ottawa Valley, Ontario, Canada. She loves wolves, travelling, and exploring new cultures and cuisines. Her obsession with folklore and myth often weaves itself into her stories, multiple of which are published with Havok. Her writing has been included in Bingeworthy, A Kind of Death from Uncommon Universes Press and the Faces to the Sun collection edited by S.J. Blasko. She dreams of attending ComicCon in Princess Zelda cosplay.


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    • Thank you so much!! I’m so glad. It took me a while to figure out the right direction for this story, but I’m so happy I got it to where it needed to be!

  • Brilliant! I love the tense theme and new perspective. If this one was a novel, I’d get in line to read the ending…

  • Original, unique, and breathtaking. I love this incredibly new twist on a tale-old classic. I love how Mariya’s dedication to her country sprouts from her love of her father. And that ending was perfect! The world is fresh and fascinating. I purely enjoyed this story!

    • Thank you so much, Amanda!!! Your words mean a lot, and I’m so grateful you enjoyed this story! <333 Thank you for reading and your enthusiasm for this tale!

  • Ooh, interesting. I love how strongly the red theme permeates the story. I wonder, though… in the original legend, the beast wasn’t an innocent victim. I wonder if Prince Illya has done something that will complicate Mariya’s motives for helping him?

    • Thank you! Yeah, there are so many variants to the BatB tale–I wanted to hearken to the ones that portray him as someone who was wrongfully attacked. (The version I really love is the one where he’s a fairy prince enchanted by a wicked fairy when he rejects her advances; gives me Joseph vibes). That’s not to say that he’s perfect–I’ll have to dive deeper into his character when I expand this into a longer story. :-)

  • This is such a fascinating retelling! I love the Russian influences and the fact that she’s a code breaker. Awesome job!! 😁

    • Thank you, fren!!! I can’t wait to dive more into the codebreaking in the longer version I’m planning. :-D

  • Fun retelling of Beauty and the Beast. I like how you subtly used the color red is so many different ways and how the rose had magic.

    • Thank you! I’d love to see more Slavic representation in fantasy + scifi. It seems to be on the rise, which is cool to witness.

      Hey, “doomed turrets” is pretty accurate, too!

  • Love this heroic tale and retelling Beka!! So cool to see the rose be a tool for stealth rather than for the passing of time :D

  • Another amazing story. Really enjoyed the rebel/undercover rebellion vibe going on to free an entire kingdom from a powerful invader. I don’t think I’m the only one hoping this is but one part of a longer story ;)

  • Always fun to read your fairytale reimaginings! So glad your comments below sound like you’re working on a longer version!

  • “she was a codebreaker. And what was magic but a different kind of code?”

    Oh my goodness, Bekaaa!!! I LOVE the magic in this story!!! Awesome job! I can’t wait to find out what happens next =D

    • Thank you, Kaitlyn! I struggled finding the right way to tell this story—glad the struggle paid off! ☺️❤️

  • Whoa, that was so cool!! :O I love B&B and this was a delightful twist on it. Really made me want to learn more! And I love the depth and richness behind it, making it feel like a window to a wider world. So vivid and well-written!

    • Thank you so much, Deborah!!! <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! It was fun to write my heritage into it!

  • I want more.
    Why isn’t there more!!????

    Ok, I’m fine…

    Beautifully done retelling with such vivid worldbuilding. The invisibility magic, and the rose, and everything is SO COOL. Phew!

    • Heheheheh what every writer wants to hear! ;-) Thank you so much, Abigail! <3 I'm so glad you enjoyed this twist on the tale!

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