By Clarissa Ruth
“Come on Lianna, I got you.” I gripped her hand as I led her down the boulders. We descended toward a deserted cove surrounded by white cliffs where glistening sand beckoned us to play among the turquoise waves. Wearing flip-flops, Lianna hadn’t planned to do any rock climbing on this trip, but she rose to the challenge with a grin and her teasing line, “I’d follow you anywhere, Bo.”
When we hit sand, I discarded my boots and led my wife down to the waves. The water sparkled almost as much as her eyes, and the sunshine on her hair gleamed like silken midnight. I pulled her to me and planted a quick kiss. Then I slipped the sapphire-studded ring off her fourth finger.
Kneeling on the warm sand, I held it out. “Marry me.”
“You goof.” Her grin sent my head spinning. And she wondered why I kept doing this. Playing along, she let me adorn her finger for the ninth time since we’d said, “I do.”
We swam and picnicked, then she napped while I, restless as the waves, swam again. The locals had warned us about undertow, so I was determined to stay close to shore. When I tired of testing my strength against the waves, I turned over and let them buoy me.
Huge cumulus clouds caught my gaze and I drifted, watching the embryo of a storm. The view held me captive until, too late, I realized how far out I’d floated. I dropped my feet to swim back.
A force unlike any I’d experienced lashed around my ankles. I cried out. Lianna sat up and watched me disappear beneath the surface.
The undertow was not water.
I kicked at the webbing, but it only entangled my knees as well. Soon the stuff—a thin, silver thread—had bound me completely. My lungs were ready to burst, but I still fought.
It couldn’t end like this! Not on our honeymoon.
The back of my arms began to itch. From the threads, a cold, clammy sensation spread until it enveloped me. My lungs not only burned, they felt like they were shriveling inside me. I curled up, desperate for air, sure the end had come.
The sensation faded. I lived on.
The itching in my arms intensified, then eased. All discomfort gone, I opened my eyes.
Faces surrounded me. They watched me, intent, excited. Blue.
I backed away, flicking my—
Oh, mercy. I have a tail.
My arms were a deep blue. Fluttering gills lined them, pulling oxygen into my body. I fully comprehended the change as I beheld the merpeople who surrounded me like expectant parents at a birth.
One swam forward, clicking and squeaking almost like a dolphin, but with more intricate and complex patterns and rhythms. I understood.
“Don’t worry,” it said in its language. “You’ll soon forget your other life. You are one of us now. Our world is even better.”
Forget Lianna? Never.
I tried to dodge around them but my lower appendage, clumsy in its newness, failed me. Blue hands latched onto me, pulling me away.
Lianna.
Yet even if I could escape, to return to land—to even breathe—was not an option. Who was I to her now? A dead man. A merman.
They dragged my body away into the deeps, but my heart, my love, still breathed the briny air of the coastland, tears streaming down her face.
I quickly adapted to my new life. Herding fish, lassoing dolphins for sport, and netting jellyfish to clear our waters became routine for me. Bluefish served raw with seaweed fit my palate well, and my craving for challenge found its equal in hunting sharks using sharpened whalebone and swordfish tusks. The sorrow I might have felt seemed unable to exist in my new world or my new body. But still, something was missing.
One day I grew restless, a feeling I’d almost forgotten. I swam far and swam alone. As surely as the silver threads had brought me to a new life, a strange golden band around my fourth finger seemed to pull me back.
In human reckoning, a year had passed since the merpeople took me as their son. All that time, I still remembered a heart-shaped face with sparkling eyes and long black hair. That vision drew me up, close to the world of air where I dared not stay.
Beyond the ripples were cliffs, a small beach, and—my heart lurched—a figure with hair like silken midnight. I drew near, watching from beneath. She did nothing but stare out at the water, with a strange wetness running down cheeks so pale they were almost white.
Almost without thinking, I pushed up until my head broke the surface.
Her eyes met mine and she gasped. She stood frozen, like coral on a rock. Sturdy boots dug into the sand.
I beckoned, she came.
Casting aside the boots, she waded in. She let me touch her hand. With utter gentleness, lest this creature of beauty flee, I pulled the ring off her fourth finger. I held it out to her. No longer equipped with the tongue of men, I willed her to read the question in my eyes. Marry me?
With the merest whisper, she answered, “You goof. You know I’d follow you anywhere.”
I still knew how to smile. I slipped the ring on for the tenth time, then grabbed her hand. She didn’t resist me. Perhaps she could read another phrase in my eyes: “Come on Lianna, I got you.”
With joy bubbling up in my heart, I led her into the waves.


(23 votes, average: 2.48 out of 3)



This is outstanding! Heartbreaking and heartwarming all rolled into a bit of flash.
A sweet romance.
Beautiful job, Clarissa! Love how quickly I became attached to the couple, how sad and irreversible Bo’s quandary was, and how you closed the circle with the repeat of their private joke. Excellent.
Thanks, Teddi! I’m glad you enjoyed the read. Yeah, poor Bo. Then again, maybe he’s happier spearing sharks…as long as Lianna is there. ;)
Beautiful, sweet romance with a mermaid twist. Great job.
Excellent and heartwarming, just what I needed on a below zero day.
Brrrrrr. I feel for you on that one. *Tosses you a blanket* *Hands you hot chocolate* Glad it warmed you in one way, at least. :)
This captured me. Very well done.
Thanks for sharing your writing, Clarissa! The descriptive language painted a picture for me of this love story with a surprising twist. I like how the proposal comes full circle. Great work!
What a wonderful story. Full of love & passion
My second time reading this story and I found it as lovely as I did the first time.
Hi Rachel! Thanks for stopping by and for the comment. And for your help making the story what it is today. :-D
Wonderful story! It was engaging from the start a D I loved how the characters were developed. I love how you tied the beginning part that showed the initmacy of their relationship and ended it on the same note. Shows how true love can make it through any obstacle!
Indeed. Thanks for reading, and for the words of wisdom! :)
What a sweet story! I really liked how you tied the beginning and end together.
Thanks, Michael! I love connections like that in stories, too. Glad you enjoyed the story :)
So enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
Oh my goodness, I LOVE this! Best mermaid story ever!
*Blushes* *Hands you a mermaid sticker* So encouraging, thank you!
So beautiful and enthralling! What a gift you have with words and storytelling!!! Encore!
*Clears throat for encore* Oh wait, wrong kind. *Pulls out keyboard* I had this one idea… ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Clarissa, I’m so happy to see your work. I love the fact that–even in another world–Bo’s love for Llianna remained strong and true. And I love that they were together again at the end.
Thanks for reading! Love is strongest, isn’t it? Always hopes, always trusts, always perseveres…
What an incredible story. I found myself buried in a fantasy world not knowing what to expect. I drifted till the last word.
Great! While you’re drifting, watch for undertow… ;)
What an incredible story, awesome thriller. I found myself buried in a fantasy world not knowing what to expect. I drifted till the last word. Weldone!
Totally cool. I was hooked from beginning to end.
*Takes you off hook* Glad you enjoyed, but though I hooked you, I’ll throw you back so you can be free. *Tosses you back.* Thanks for reading!
SO AMAZED! What a beautiful story.
Fun little tale!
Wonderfully imaginative story. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.